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The Human system! Humanity's last hope.
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After waking up in an unknown place, our protagonist, Amon Daisetsu, find himself face to face with someone he never expected to meet, it's none other than one of his favorite characters from a certain manga called records of Ragnarok, he then sees himself getting offered a deal. This deal will sign the start of his new life.
Warning: please don't expect a perfect mc from day one, I plan to make this story as realistic as I can, so he will have his own personality, his own strength and weaknesses and will be constantly evolving throughout the story, if you can't understand that much then please do not even bother reading a single chapter.
This will be a multiverse story so expect a few world travels. Also this isn't a harem story nor do I think there would be any romance at all and even if there is it won't be a main part of the story.
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First I would like to point out the near zero writing mistakes! Second I would like where the story is going so far and lastly mc may not be exactly how I like him but at least he not picking up every girl he see's because having more than 2 women is not right in any sense
Definitely has potential to become a great book its unique in its own right and you don't often see too many fanfics like this.............................
Tho writing quality isn't all that bad. Just needs some improvement. I suggest you use ai to check for spelling and grammatical mistakes to improve your work. and not write the story. If u for example put in your paragraph and it changes and tweaks it add improvements you'd think help and when u feel satisfied with the outcome I guess post it
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It’s pretty good, although the mc is a little detached from empathy