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A commoner boy named (Zac Keller) wants nothing more but to become a hero of his home country and the world, just like the five former heroes he idolized! Until he came home to see as his mother was being assaulted and later killed by the kingdom's knights, the same knights that swore to protect the kingdom and its people. Hoping for justice to be served against the Knights, it was but a vain hope. Any authority never accepted his mother's case and instead would brush it off as "just another useless commoner dead." So throughout the years, living his life with the scene of his mother stuck in his head, he would constantly be abused by the people he once wanted to protect.
His sanity soon had been lost. He now wanted nothing more than to destroy everything he tried to protect.
Years passed by, and he is now chosen as one of the five heroes.
- Novel includes:
EXTREME VIOLENCE
CANNIBALISM
AND R*PE
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Escribe una reseñaJust finished till chapter 16 which is newest update while writing this review.The story and characters are very interesting,keep it up author 😊.And make the mc have his revenge 😈.
The opening is excellent. Definitely brought out some... interesting emotions when you talked about his mother. But your tenses drive me crazy. You use 'Would' like it's the holiest word in the English language. I'd give it five stars for the opening if it wasn't for that.
it seems through our the chapters Zac's eye being burnt was almost non existent until it was brought back up on chapter 13. Not the greatest stability of updates but at least you are taking your time to write and give something good. all and all the fact you can me me hate the antagonists so much Is a good job, can't wait for the revenge
Definitely some hiccups here and there, but it doesn't ruin any of the flow or understanding of the story. Good novel! I am looking forward to the future updates. (This is gonna get big).
Autor BadStripes
Author's Review: The beginning is a bit shabby. It could have been better if I had the writing skills or had put more effort into it. The stability of updates is not the best, and I will sometimes do weekly uploads or daily. Depends on my mood, imagination, and motivation. Overall the updates(to me) are the worst part. I am doing my best to improve my writing skills, make things more interesting and make them make sense. I can't accurately review my world background or character design. That is for you readers to decide. Please leave feedback with your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make something better, and criticism is welcomed.