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The main character is a fat loser that has dropped out of school and has nothing to do except watch anime and play games but that will all comes to an end, when he creates a hack system to hack a game that he likes very much.
If everything went according to his plan he would have been a very rich person with the help of the bot but before he could test it, he was hit by a lightning which sent him to go in a coma and when he wakes up he has a hack system that can hack anything.
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So I tried. Not very hard but I did try the grammar was atrocious. It was so bad I just couldn't get over I read a comment that said the author was 14 and I honestly believe it. The concept isn't terrible it's why I clicked on it. The good concept is hidden behind terrible grammar and terrible character dialogue.
interesting story and the mc have a super op system that can even hack a world,universe,and heaven hope the author will release more chap and can have a stable release date
Gotta say i love the idea and the story looks promissing please keep it up and try not to drop it too fast i did find some spelling errors but that is easy to fix just find an editor or a proofreader and its all good. It defenitly deserves some good reviews and hope the autor feels pride for what he managed to do
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the grammar is not that good but if you think rationally the author is only 14 or 15 so they are quite young. Furthermore he's not a professional writer, although the story is a bit aggravating cause the ML is so OP with out any pain it's kind of odd. But all in all the author did try their best so give some credit c: they wrote a story which not many people would do so I personally admire that people would do something that they know other people would criticized. So 5 star to you author ! c:
WOW... just, no. This... This is bad. Bad grammar. Bad writing. Bad idea's. Save Ace, replace the flash, hand out with young justice? what? totally feels like it is written by a child. Mayb fine for a forum. But isn't this site a LITTLE bit better than children fan-fiction? I expect better from qidian/webnovel.
You need an editor some times you leave out words screw up sentences and even make sentences I can't understand. That being said your creativity is not bad. Story is intresting in that it's like eating desert first which is fun but every time I read this I get the feeling even you don't know what's going to happen next in the story which is a little weird. The felling has gotten less as I've read further but I hope their is a plan for such a good story.
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The idea of this novel have an amazing potential but sadly it was all ruined the MC is just too stupid The Cliché Japanese MC of isekai novel I like Op MC but what's the point making him Op to seal his power ? And why the hell would he tell his mom about the hack system ? And the character wtf the elf he meet her and boom it's his girlfriend because his MOM misunderstanding. The MC is a total pussy even if he is Op. Author if you read my review I hope you think about Rewritting this novel The First chapter were really good that's some of the thing I hope u improve: -Make the MC a badass That doesn't take random people with him just because he is lazy to say ""No"" and doesn't help them just because he can And the romance should not be Forced . -the MC should never tell other about his cheat He should have just gave the Talent pill to his mother and let her live her life -about sealing his power just make him hide his Cultivation level but not appear as mortal just some high Cultivation that suit the purpose "join a sect ..."
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It was interesting at first, however as the story progress I felt that everything was just being force to much that it comes out as nonsensical. The grammar is also one of the things that is driving me nuts. Wrong spellings are everywhere. Some of the words are incorrectly used. Basically, the author desperately needs an editor.
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
I just want to say this. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more. Plz more.
Yeah... the story is good But the ___NAME ___ it gives the felling of WESTERN style and the, Cultivation and all give a EASTERN felling . So it is quite confusing to imagine the story. (It's not bad at all). Other then Thai it is very good.^_^😊 AND SPELLING PLEASE
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP MC FKING AWSOME...................................................................................................................
I loveeeee this novel so much its awesome so either plzz don't drop it thxxx x x x x x x x x. x x x x x x x x x. xx. x xxx xxx. Z z x x xxx. X. xx.
i hope you get an editor or someone go help with your grammar please then it would be awesome. i had high expectations and i loved how it was set up. again FIND. AN. EDITOR. PLS.
If you read this, you don't need to read the novel anymore cause this explains all. things to describe the story: broken opass mc, girls want penisue, sect wrekt, evil villains wrekt, broken language typing skills, mountain🖒🖒🖒 How the story develops: 👌👌🖒🖒😄ugly *****assdickpussynolifemcalmostdieshewakesuponhospitalhegetssystemhesaluckysonofabitchhetakesdrugtoturntoturnintoaswanhegotodifferentworkhewrektvillianshebecomeopassfuckhecomesbacktoearthwithcumdump#1chanthentellsmomheissupermanondrugtimes1000000000momexcidedlybecomescumdump#2andtheytraveltootherworldtowrektvillianandthenjoimsect/destroysecthemeetscumdumpphoenix#3hefuckshertheyhavebabies#1#2jellysotheyallmakebabiesandtraveltheworldbecomingsuperondrugx100000000000 yup this sins about everything😋🖒🖒🖒
So to begin with: I rated this novel so good: DESPITE of all the unnecessary and too many spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. I actually bear to read it despite. This shows two things: 1) this novel is really really good! So good that it compensates it’s mistakes! 2) I hope for better grammar and spelling quality. But to the author: please don’t hold back with writing for the second point. I wanted to let this novel go... but decided to read it despite. I hope you won’t drop it xD and that you will develop your writing skills ... I mean the spelling and grammar part. Someone said the author is still underaged in his or her teens. That is even more amazing! Since now, I did not like the other original novels here, which I read. I dropped them all. Except for this one!
Well it's funny and everytime i read this novel i feel like my brain is on drug :D Anyway I recommend this novel for those of you who just looking for something new or waiting for your favorite novel to release a new chapter You should definitely give it a try to see if you like it Hope you enjoy the book like i do xD
Just ignore that I five starred this Hello I’m the author of this novel and would like to give some more information about the novel. 1, The main character will go to an Anime universe, DC universe, Marvel universe. 2, the first few chapter will be on earth mainly. 3, the system is able hack everything in the existence. So basically the main character will be very OP