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the emotions system in DxD
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Naruki is 24 years old assistant lab scientist, he over worked one days on a project and slept on his desk, only to wake up to a bit different world..
ps : might have crossovers
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Es entretenido, espero el desarrollo de la historia y que no se arruine de forma patético, aunque espero que salga con Rías, ella es mi waifu favorita, solo espero que no hablando es la historia
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O livro é bom , espero que ele fique com todas as garotas se não ficar vou baixa a avaliação hehehe . ............................................................
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Very good. It has an interesting system with unexpected skills. The only issues is that there are some grammer issues. But they are basically negligible.
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very good for now, the system is not OP and is new or at least I didn't find one using the same idea, I just advise not to use dialogs from different people in the same paragraph, even if it's few words between two people still put the lines in different paragraphs because it is easier for readers and most people leave the story without even reading when they see this type of writing.