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The Cost of Immortality.

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Autor: JustGo

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What would you do if you where grated Immortality? Some may think of it is a blessing and others a curse.

This all depends on perspective, if you were granted a choice to be immortal but at a great cost, what would you do?

Well, meet Rob, just your average nerd who fantasizes about immortality and was actually granted it! But in exchange, he has to destroy the worlds of his Masters Rival.

*/I don't want to spoil too much, but this Is basically a story about an average guy being sent to another world(Magic based) and only granted a unique type of immortality, in exchange he has to destroy the world.

The novel is about how he goes about this and how he overcomes various challenges in order to do so.*/

/*It will be a slow start as I want this to be as realistic as possible (It's obviously difficult to destroy a world without being OP), he starts with nothing and has to overcome many different challenges in order to achieve his goal. */

*All suggestions and ideas about the book are welcome!!
If you spot any issues in a chapter please let me know so I can update it

I will try release more than 1 chapter a week from Monday to Friday, this can change depending on how busy I am at work.*

*The cover image is not mine, all credit goes to the creator, If you would like me to remove it, please let me know*

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JustGo
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Hi everyone!! I am making a *Modest review* of my own work. XD This book will have quite a slow start as I try to improve as a writer and explain the world the best I can. I have been planning the rules and system the world has to follow and it is going to take a while to explain everything. Anyway please comment if you like the novel so far, any and all advise on how to better my writing and story will be much appreciated!! Thanks and Kind Regards!! JustGo

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I really like the topic of him destroying the world internally rather than like world domination rather than those other novels it's just world domination, harem, pleasure and opness total bs well for those who like stuff well I can't do anything about it. I like the world building, real world problems and our little mc. I hate the time skips and the fight scenes ha the worded fight scenes. Well I'm loving the novel so far hope you don't drop it. (I hate reviewing cause I get so technical don't know the right words to say but meh keep doing a good job for us webbers swinging through the metropolis of web books to defeat the overlord degenerates the harem lovers) That was completely necessary I so pledge my heart to the Anti-harem sect.

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DaoJim
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Going good so far!! It is quite different to most things I have read, so the change is nice. Please keep it up and don't drop 🙏 [img=recommend]

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GodOfThighs

I really like this book mostly because of the magic system and how long the novel can go on for. Like he could die on his current body and have to start over again, or he can destroy the world and go on to another world and repeat over and over again.

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Lavielle

Absolutely LOVE this Novel!! Should ABSOLUTELY WITHOUT A DOUBT ADD THIS!why?! -Rob is a very interestingly unique mc- he's like SAITAMA but a child, that drinks LOTSS of ALCOHOL, smokes poison,Drinks alcohol, does drugs,drinks lots and loootsss of alcohol, reallyyy TALL(like share your blessings mah dude!!), does magic,and did I mention? he drinks lots of alcohol!!(He is 10 year old child btw~))

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subastion

this is a great story that keeps you wanting to read more(at least for me) it's a little fast or slow at times but I think it needs that at those times. MC ain't over powered were most other novels does that. I personally I prefer the MC to learn from his mistakes. and not be a goody too shoes because that does get boring fast. In the end I think this is a good novel over all

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I have not found many errors in your work so far, it was great reading these first 34 chapters, it gave me a great outline of the story. I would love to see the rest of this story.

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