The Apostle's Descent

LV 5

Injustice

Just because this isnt a harem. Im seeing way too many harem novels and harem itself is not a bad concept its just the shitty way writers put it in their fanfics. Harem almost always ruins the story and there are some horny teens who love it for some reason..... sighhh

LV 2

LazyPenWriter

This is my shameless review of my own story, based on the fact that Character Designs and World Background aren't really mine but stolen from other series. As for writing quality, I consider myself to be on the upper end of Fanfiction quality. Story development is at four because I actually like what I wrote up to now and I do have a thought out plan. The only thing I can't promise is a stable update schedule so I can confidently say that I can update at least three times a week.

LV 3

OkayVelvet

I liked this originally because you treated being reincarnated like a normal person rather than as a made up character, it almost feels like you were the one being reincarnated, but after getting out of the gate your character's attitude has gotten more annoying and unrealistic, it will probably stay that way as well, all characters are supposed to experience a growth period and experience hurdles so it makes sense that your character has developed but the way you gave him an instant power-up and a high position in that society by being accepted by the guild leaders as "equals" at the start rather than as a rookie like every other story that balances out the power system in their story, good characters understand their own limitations and the power gap between themselves and something that can kill them in one hit and develop ways to bridge this gap making them more likeable, which is why I'm going to give you a bad review despite the interesting concept

LV 7

starking

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LV 3

HotSauce67

Its good but i like harem there many potential waifu but it just go waste ...................................................... 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔..................

LV 5

Whtvr

I like the novel but gasai yuno's existence irks me too much. Idk, I just don't like her. so sorry I'm just gonna drop this. ...............

LV 4

MAGE_OF_FLOWER

this is a good novel, there's no reason not to give you 5 stars____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 2

N0_Hope

Unfortunately I didn't like the story . At first it started with a great idea on thee first episode but then you started adding people from so many different animes. My problem is that I haven't seen even half of those animes either because they're boring or that I was looking at other animes. I got such a headache trying to understand the logic that at the end I just gave up

LV 4

Ice_Wielding_Ronin

As of the latest chapter (6 - Introductions and Future Plans) this had become one of the few Fanfics I actively wait for an update of. It doesn't feel too slow nor too fast paced in the developments and the interactions between characters are entertaining. If anything, I would like LazyPenWriter-sensei to develop more of Noah's personality and inner thoughts. He feels slightly bland up to the moment, as not too many emotions have been shown from him,

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LV 10

Elucidator1359

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LV 2

Theforgottenone

It’s pretty good but I feel like you should explain more of the world (even if it’s based on solo leveling) _____________________________________________________________________

LV 4

labrat1

This is a pretty good fic the stability of updates are pretty good, the writing quality is on the high end of most fics here, so far there doesn’t really seem to be to much of a goal or conflict yet which is find since it’s only in its 16 chapter (yet), the characters interactions don’t feel super forced its pretty smooth and natural but the only problem I have is when he does the press conference (when he explained how he had a higher growth rate) because he didn’t have any prior interaction with the people of the world yet right? So how did he know that everyone had a system and if his system wasn’t an abnormality (maybe I missed something). Overall it’s a very good fic but I hope the author builds the world a bit more. Finally I hope the author doesn’t drop this and this fic gets more popular.

LV 1

SaifuHxh

It's a good novel pls don't drop it____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 10

Voltis

I don't particularly like stories where crossovers between completely unrelated works happen. However, this story is very interesting. The grammar is great and the writing style is passable. And you can only give great new stories some support in the form of 5 stars! (since power stones are very limited)

LV 1

Daoist367883

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LV 4

Rattlywheat

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