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A gamer who always download hacks, has created a cheat that could master anything regardless the affinity of the character in rpg.
Vaun who always likes to hack games, was transported to a world where his weakness are the rulers, but with a cheat that he makes, anything in this world will not bound him.
"You want to fight me with swords? Come on then. I'll show you the moves of a sword master."
"You want to fight me with long range weapons? Come on then, but be careful, because each shot is a piece of me."
"You want me to fight you bare handed? No way! I will only use gloves so already accept it."
"You want me to chant? I'll just sing then."
Many people where shock at him.
Seeing their shock faces, Vaun only smiled and said: "I'm All-Around after all."
With a system, Vaun was unraveled at any categories.
Let's start the adventure of Vaun reaching the apex.
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well i can say i have read worse. but there aren't many that are worst. about the mc in the first few chapters he is more or less afraid of woman. because of almost R*ape in his first life. the next chapters after this rape becomes a main theme. later when he decide he want to do somthing about it, the system forces him for *** with a rando woman. currently chapter 56 he wants a harem because he was a neet anime manga lover. the story arcs are short. half of the chapters are almost filled with the system look. at chapter 56 i'm wondering why there are so many that want more chapters. but not me so i'm dropping this
let's make this novel number 1#. this is the best one that i have readed here on web novel so far. keep up the good work Czester. p.s what got you started on writing this novel.
Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter.. .................................................................................................
It was supposed to be a great story, but the MC is very dumb and does not enjoy what he has, and worse came from a modern age and he seems very *****, and to make matters worse he says a good person and decides very fast to take a life even though NEET was previously isolated by persecution (as a coward may have a life-long resolve). To make matters worse he will be targeted to be engaged to growers but stronger than himself, and even then he goes to a place that anyone could say goes the **** (anyone would ask the cultivation levels of the world and especially where is going, but he does not ...) the system seems to have a great knowledge of the world, but MC does not ask anything useful to him. He said he read a lot of novels, but he does not even know what dual cultivation is, and to pamper he was in a perfect place to stay strong, but what he does (he leaves the place to go to a dangerous place, especially for him, cultivation too high for their own age, even being 3 times more difficult to grow). My view of the MC * super idiot Observation> The novel has many cliches, and much repetition of phrases and information making it very repetitive. The initial idea of the novel is very good and needs a lot of revision and also a touch of realism, mainly psychological of the MC.
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zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.
Reading the first paragraph of chapter 1 had me want to drop asap, skipping to chapter 40 cemented my decision. Rating 1 star. Chapters lack depth, no descriptive writing at all other then basic stuff, lacking in details and most important the story has no flow. I felt this was a creation of a ten year old, the very first paragraph was so lacking and held the most basic description of the main character it was boring.
So far so goooooooooood....... But need upgradein on release system.. 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁
Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter.. .................................................................................................
Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter.. .................................................................................................
I am not giving any stars because I haven’t read the story. I don’t know if your the actual owner of that picture, but I have seen it before. It’s actually used on a game with the artists signature written on it. If you actually want to use it I suggest you get the artists permission. And you can’t claim you don’t know because the original does have the signature on it. This one used is obviously edited
zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.
I just feel like there is no realism to the story in-terms of the man character and the world He just accepts that on dead he is transported, resurrected/given a new body and a system with no questions, surprise, etc. He first becomes aware in this new world in front of a dragon like giant lizard but then the lizards exist is completely ignored There just seems to be not detail or realism in the story at all.. I known it fantasy + system and all but collecting a 120 body strengthening fruits in a few hours and easily becoming level 20 with plenty to spare but a local harvester/collector is only level 2, why?? I'm not saying I can do any better or trying to dishearten the author I just think there is so much in this story where you just think how did 5 paragraphs of necessary story telling get reduced to 2 sentences. This is the fist time I have written a negative review but it just seems like the author has a good idea but they really need to go back and re-write the story from the start and add in more details about the world and about the MC's thought process i.e why would in think he is safe after reaching level 21 given that he did it in a few hours of arriving by simply eating a few fuits. I mean has he used his appraisal like skill on some of the animals, is he just stupid and natural arrogant/delusional. I mean its the same as a normal guy going to 1 karate lesson and leaving he is now a master fighter. well if you have read to hear in my rant good on you P.S. if you are the author and you actually bother to read this I hope you take this as the constructive criticism I tried to make it.
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I really don’t know why am I reading this, I really thought that the author would become more discriptive of ..... well everything . Right now what I am seeing and reading here is nothing but words on paper, no real feelings behind the words being said or the actions that are happening . I don’t really know if it’ll get better or anything, after all I only read till chapter 8 , but right now all I am seeing is emotionless dialog said by blank faces who we don’t even know who they look like , and chapters that seem to not really have a goal to them just a bunch of jumbled up words together . Nevertheless I’ll keep on reading for the reason that brought all of you guys here, we ain’t got nothing else to read 🤣🤣
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Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter.. .................................................................................................
Hi guys! I just release chapter 24. Sorry for releasing too slow because I sometimes need to rest. I hope that all of you will still wait for my chapters that I will release in the upcoming days. Thanks for reading!!!
zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.
Need improvement in all aspect...beside explaining the level of cultivation...author should've explain what is yang cultivator/yin cultivator in early part of the story...and dont make the male mc more stunning than female please...dont make it sound like yaoi novel...its disgusting
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Looks like someone knows our MC's weakness. Wait for my other releases and know the real reason of our MC getting weak because of girls. I hope others can wait for the challenge that our MC will face. So please keep reading my first time novel.