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You should know how it goes, I died, met a ROB, got some wishes, before getting reincarnated in a world of my choosing.
Let's get started shall we?
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In case you didn't realise, this is a Tensura Slime fanfic.
I don't consider myself a veteran writer, so if you have any feedback I would be glad to read them. Don't expect a flawless plot line.
I don't mind you guys making a bad review but at least let me know what I did wrong.
I own nothing except my own characters. The cover pic is something I found off google, if you want me to take it down just drop a comment.
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It's a beautiful day outside... Birds are singing, Flowers are blooming... On days like these, Author like you... Should be making more chaps!
Idk. It's a crackfic. I just personally don't enjoy this one. MC gets reincarnated by a meat bun. Becomes Rimuru and there's a lot of meatbun worship and the kind of forced comedy. Like every so often there's jojo, sasuga rimuru or all hail meatbun sama... Idk just not that funny or interesting.
It's pretty funny at the start, but then it just gets hard to read when he summons Mikoto. He's an omega simp and madly in love with her for no reason. I wouldn't mind if it was mutual but it's only him that likes her and he comes off super creepy/desperate. Some may not mind the development but I can't stand when Mc's with god-like abilities become complete betas for girls they just met.
The main idea was ok but then adding a random 2 " MC " which might or might not be the antagonist was the point where many dropped this story . Also out of nothing you changed the story on the last chapter... why -? You could have fixed somehow the shtty mistake of the antagonist by doing a great MC isekai but then changed the story... I'm gave up this story . Bye : p
Its a good Tensura Fic. The problem is the MC's personality towards women. Please I am hoping he isn't some pushover. Just meeting a girl and he's already scared of her anger, even though he is many times stronger than her.
Lets see how much fun this fanfic will turn up to be. Plus lets see how long you will keep that "no-harem", heheh. I bet he gonna end up with 2-3 member. Good luck and have fun with it.
To be honest I'm a bit disappointed in the MC for his childishness by how easily he gets sidetracked over the smallest of things and goes on a tangent about how great the original protagonist of the world was and about how much he admired him and his sidekicks to the point it gets annoying after the first few chapter's. Not for me fam I'm out
other than adding more 2 oc and making early rimuru stronger almost nothing really changed other than that, oh and also when veldora got absorb by the other oc villain?, i see no change from chap 1 to 15, i just got tired reading it cuz you know i read the original novel why would i read it again when I'm trying to find a ff version, plus the mc is very childish maybe autistic his patience is none existence a lot of monologues the other character don't talk much, and like i said every thing is just like what rimuru do in the original novel the really differences between the two is just him having knowledge of the canon but he still follow the script when he can at least change it even his name is rimuru. average ff,good novel for newbie reader and also for those who didn't read the novel, that's all
The dialogues could have been presented better, the forced comedy is getting out of hand, and the MC is one of those "Strong MC but world's weakest person in front of lover" types. Of course the grammar is still up there when it comes to WN standards... all in all it's good 🙂
Its alright but a bit too crack-ish for me , the mc also monologues a lot wich gets very annoying , almost 0 proper character interactions as of now.
1star for doing something to veldora 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Eh, its like a Ridiculous Rip-off of the Original Tensura Slime... but in a good way? The only problem was the too much "comedy" and its clear than the author is doing this for fun and entertainment. All in all, its good. Also, has the author read the full LN?
That weird, just like another happy go lucky story with a little spice. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
how dare u bait this young master with a lovely misaka cover?! youre courting death, mortal! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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It’s very funny but other than that it’s not a very good story. Ishdhehehdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhfhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhd
Of course, since I'm the author, I'm gonna rate 5 stars. If you're gonna write a bad review, at least let me know what's wrong with my novel. I hope you enjoy my work. :)