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System: Daily login!!, jackpot on the first day!!!
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Taufik D'Archy was just an ordinary Boy who lived an Ordinary Life in an Ordinary environment.
The Only Thing That seems Unordinary In His Life Was His Father's Sudden Disappearance.
But Someday, He Wakes Up And Finds That His Ordinary Life was Destined To Change With "A Daily Login system" That suddenly Appeared in his life.
[The World Is Not Simple As The Master Thinking]
[Many Danger Lurking In The Darkness]
[Many Hidden Wolrd For Master To Explore]
[And Many Mystery Masters Have To Uncover]
With The power he got from System Can our MC Overcome His Trial? let's follow his journey to Become the Strongest Existence as he Overcomes the Trials one by one...
#SlowPace #Don'tHaveMuchAction #FastRomance
English is not my first language, so sorry if there are any typos, spelling, or grammar mistakes, but... haa~ No, forget it, I will keep trying to learn and be better, Thank you
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love the book great work really a fun of the originals and tvd great work can't wait for more
It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.
Very very good love it just make sure to fix the translations because right now it’s hard to understand
the story wasn't awful intially but as soon as you get into the paid chapters the author starts adding nonsense to up the word counts to make chapters more expensive and even regularly adds massive "a/n" of just one sentence on repeat like something stupid like "I love football" just to boost wordcount. All around the story could have been good but I can't continue to support this author's antics.
Even with the translation issues, it's a very good novel. Keep writing author your doing just fine.
Okay, so this novel, based on my assessment (after reading till chapter 18) is that the world background has a potential that's why I gave it 5 stars, while for others it's just average pacing seems to fast like how the MC just got straight to a relationship. I know this was considered months but most of it is skipped so there is not enough background. The fights I've seen also feel like street fights, nothing serious for example the assassination which they resolved pretty easily after defeating them, this assassin clan is dubbed as silent killer but felt like a friendly gangster in a good neighborhood. Also this web novel has elements of a wuxian novel which you guessed it, there is a young master trope and death seeking clan with matching death wish dialogue. So it can potentially have many side quests if this persists in chapter progression which is not bad if you like this kind of plot. For problems, there are some grammatical errors (maybe a lot of them, I'm still reading so it might have lessened) which is still bearable, I've seen much worse translation ☠️. Lastly, updates are good for now 😊.
*ukhum* your book it's quite Good, not very Good, but still Readable. #bukan aku ini!!
Great Job Untill Now Just Needs Some Fixing With The Mistypes Author -san if you want i can be your editor for free if you plan to continue this novel 🤝🤝✌🏻
The translation just annoys me, I'm dropping this shit until the translation is fixed
Tried to give this novel a read but couldn't get past 4 chapters due to the terrible grammar.
Man just use Grammarly to check and proof read to rectify, some of us read novels to relax not for more stress Mistakes do happen but if someone points them out fix them
if you are going to publish in English, then confirm that your grammar is going to make sense in English.
so many mistakes.......but i still like it,wil change the review once i feel like the spellings and grammar is fine
besides the aweful Grammer the story is really good it needs proofreading but other than that I have no complaints ( it's all minor stuff that if fixed will make the story flow better )
pedophilia.. teacher want to date the main character. Main character is a child.