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Start With Selling Devil Fruits in Marvel
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Earning enough to support himself, Cosmic decides to now open a Small Shop and rely on it to make and live satisfactorily.
However, unexpectedly He and his are mysteriously linked, and his shop can gain abilities, and he, as the owner of the shop, is the Supreme in the Shop.
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The English is really hard to read, Seems like those Chinese fanfics that get translated through Google translate ก็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็็๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊
I'm liking the story so far, selling powers to mostly villains has made the marvel world seem more fun and has actually made the MC more enjoyable to read about, especially with the POV of the important people who buy the fruits.
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The idea is really solid however the story is held back by the writing everything comes off as a brief summary of what happened not an actual story usually just get a brief description about what took place when characters interact. If you can get over the writing and progression issues then you might enjoy the story for what it is, however its not for me.
it's boring and it's like I'm reading a dictionary book.i don't even know who is the MC in this fanfic (either I forgotten or its just the MC is the reader) I don't even know how the MC looks.
Poorly executed, There are no dialogues its all just narration .and I'm almost 100% sure this is a translation........................... ..
Full of Cringe Explanation... bruh... I was expecting more of a secretive guy not a Know it All pompous guy [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
My Story. Amazing. I lied. It has a good plot but a amateur author so you both enjoy the story and hate the author.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop.
Dropped around 48~ It has no depth or whatsoever, the story telling at first feels like you listening someone narrating his story beside bon fire, then focusing on the superheroes, while the mc literally got neglected, i don’t have a single clue about the store, how mc oparate it, how its experience as costumer, how its look, what kind of conflict there is, and how the mc solve them, it just got skipped and a simple summary at the end, and then it back “normal” but still on heroes perspective… yeah no
its interesting and good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 find the different one
it a first person pov which quite hard to read as the uses of 'I' and 'Me' make it confusing. the fact that the owner can sell the devil so smoothly without anyone distrust is also weird. the story background also confusing as i don't know what happen to the surrounding. he also can buy a shop even though he have no identity yet. where he got the money then? im confused....
The beginning was a bit annoying to read but you can see the improvements the further you go. Honestly I love the concept with the story but I believe this could have been executed so much better.
Me sangran los ojos 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
LOL 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 if I had any powers related to control or to create or creation I can 100% say I can be a OP power user example I get the power to create a banana I can make the banana explode or I can make it like a HP potion or buff good banana or give me a bit of time and I can make it a walking banana nuke.
the mc looks like a simple shopkeeper who sells devil fruits, i imagined it would be more like the story of the restaurant in the cultivation world, with natasha as an assistant in the shop who was sent to spy and then gets involved with the mc, while join the avengers in some missions.
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Poor execution of a stellar idea. BUT I could see that your writing and style was improving in later chapters, keep it up. .................
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Cool idea, but the English is so broken I feel like I’m loosing brain cells the more I read. …..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..…..……..