Capítulo 28: The whole story
This is the draft for the whole story. There might be minor detail missing here and there but it's mostly complete.
[Characters introduction(characters that get introduce in the arcs)]
>Arc 1(Slum arc)
-Adults:
2 other members of wizard council in disguise.
Nasha- Patience(Female)
Once a member of the wizard council, leave for reasons. A genius wizard.
Hans- Justice(Male)
A member of the wizard councils. Grew close to the kids and consider them family.
Meet with the cult of the red king in the forest.
-Children:
1)Ken(Simon Lex)- Determination(Male)
2)Tok- Integrity(Male)
Street children, the first one to be adopted by Nasha. She stayed with him for a week before taking him in.
3)Hubris- Bravery(Male)
Same as Tok, was adopted later.
4)Sahra- Patience(Female)
Survival of a kindness couple higher up in the kindness organization that later take full control of the kindness country.
5)Gero- Justice(Male)
A child with trauma and low self esteem. Originally meant to be knight of Sahra.
6)Layla- Kindness(Female)
Energetic child. Become an orphan after the kindness organization in the place is destroyed.
7)Aoi- Traitless(Female)
Likes money
8)Beko- Perseverance-(Female)
Quiet.
>Arc 2.(8 years after arc 1, location is the capital)
All the other members of the wizard council(hasn't finished them yet)
Nasha dad.
King of the justice country(didn't make name yet)
Marly, the one and only princess of the country. (Same age as Ken)
She first duel with Ken and lose to his tricks, afterward she repeatedly spar with him. Follow Ken when he travels to the monster country and develops a relationship with him, which didn't last long due to circumstances.
Monster ambassador.
Has the appearance of a human child but its body covered in blue fire, like a wisp. Face has only a mouth.
>Other characters that don't have a predetermined arc to appear in.
Monster king.
Helps in the extermination of the red king cult.
Monster royal scientist-Uveris.
Makes void machine access and also the one to figure out a way to break the Star crystals without catastrophic damage.
The monsters generals.
Heads of the red king cult.(Include both monsters and humans)
They worship the red king ideals to create an eternal kingdom.
The amalgamation.
Birth from the Star crystal. Made from souls.
The red king, Arthur.
He believed to be the original red king and tries hard to create the eternal kingdom he promised and reside in the void as a soul form waiting to be resurrected. But the truth isn't as it seems...
The giant spider.
A spider that's as big as a cave. It has lived since the ancient time of the old civilization. Able to use all 6 traits and determination.
K.
A soul created by Arthur to works with him in the real world to resurrect. After thousands of years K turned on Arthur, only wanting to kill him.
K.(the real K)
The mastermind. The true red king. He created Arthur to trick everyone and wait in the back to accomplish a greater goal, something he managed to take a glimpse of when he was testing the void and souls experiments.
[Story details(Magic)]
>Magic has 3 stages: apprentice, intermediate and high.
>Each trait has 3 characteristics(and a secret 4th one)
Characteristics of each trait:
>Kindness:
Suppression
Health
Protection
>Perseverance
Information
Poison
Mind
>Justice
Connection
Burst
Faith
>Patience
Trickery
Presence
Lock
>Bravery
Battle
Explosion
Enhancement
>Integrity
Speed
Gravity
Compression
>Determination:
Destruction
War
Survival
Way the judging of magic works: each person will be judged for their stages of the individual characteristics.
For example: a kindness wizard will be judged as [Intermediate suppression, Apprentice health and Intermediate protection]
>To advance to Intermediate grade one need to know their characteristics correct name.
>To use magic one need magic power: magic power is created from the soul, there are 3 layers of the soul.
The first layer provides the magic power one use to cast spells. It regenerate the fastest.
The second layer provides magic power for more passive spells(body enhancing and similar). Regenerate 10x slower than first layer. If the first layer runs out one will use the second layer to cast spells.
The third layer sustain the soul and create magic power for both layer above. After both first and second layer is out you will have to use this layer. Using this layer can cause soul damage or death and it won't regenerate.
>Wizard can combine different characteristics for different results.
>Human magic is usually more physical.
>Magic in monsters are different than humans. Monsters magic is much more free and has no characteristics to bind it.
>The traitless soul is special. One with a traitless soul will use magic like monsters and not human's.
[World building details.]
Monsters.
>Monsters are being made from pure magic. Due to their unique constitution they can cast more diverse magic. This can also make them heal faster with small scratches but also makes monsters more vulnerable to strong wounds. Kindness healing magic is 3x less effective for monster(Kindness magic has a strong suppression effect toward all type magic)
Examples: Monster can heal 5x faster than human from blunt wound or scratches but monsters will most likely die from medium size slash.
Beasts.
>Beasts are normal creatures that have absorbed a human soul. They can endlessly absorb human soul and grew stronger and smarter each time they do.
>Advancement for humans, monsters and beasts.
•Humans: When a wizard reaches high grade for all 3 characteristics they can gain another trait. To gain another trait they'll have to absorb a human soul with the desired trait.(Traitless and the same trait isn't allowed as there will be no effect)
•Monsters: monsters can absorb human soul for a big boost in strength. However if the monster soul is not strong enough they'll die when absorbing the soul. A monster king usually have 3 souls absorbed and is as strong as 3 wizards with high grade for all characteristics.
•Beasts: absorbing any souls will give them a small boost in intelligence, strength and lifespan. One soul is equal to 3 months of lifespan. Beasts magic is like human magic and they advanced the same way, just they don't need to know the characteristics name to advance.
>The wizard council.
To be on the wizard councils one must have at least one high grade characteristic.
>Civilization:
•Humans: around middle age.
•Monsters: around steam age.
•Beast: has no civilization.
>World map:
The human continent is the biggest, next is the monster continent. The monster continent is detached from the human's, only reachable after long day of sailing. Monster is at the south east.
>Each human city is in a contract with a beast, providing human souls every year for protection against other beast.
>Both wizard council and the monster civilization is in a contract with the giant spider.
>Wizard council goal is to protect peace and order, acting as the mediator for unnecessary conflict. Won't intervene unless necessary.
>Different minerals.
•Axatite: Extremely reactive to magic. Boost effect of characteristics.(Example: Bravery explosions-> bigger explosions.)
Exist in ore form.
•Lirroit: disrupt magic. Can disperse magic in a radius depending on size. Magic use near it is 50% less effective. Exist in ore form.
•Sorrat: contains natural magic power. Can use to carve magic spells on or as an emergency magic power source. The magic inside has no trait. If magic with trait is added in it'll permanently change to that trait. Exist in crystal form, rarest of the 3.
>A soul can't exist without a body, breaking after ~10 seconds. A body can exist without a soul, can't use magic. If someone soul break they could die or sustain heavy damage.
>Red king origin: the red king managed to unite the whole world under his might. When he finished conquer the world he was already old and start researching way to extend his life. He believed that as long as he exist an eternal prosperity kingdom will exist and tried to figure out a way for immortality. He found a greater goal in the research and stop wanting an eternal kingdom.
>Soul and void research: the research of the void led to the other world gate. K used this gate to pump magic power into the other worlds, creating the mana poisoning plague(the one MC has before he died on Earth). The only way to cure the plague is to have a soul which the other worlds doesn't have.
It's essentially cultivating magic power inside a person body and harvesting the soul+magic power when they die.
>Magic poisoning. Magic poisoning appear when ones magic is stronger than their body, turning part of their body to the color of their trait. Can be dangerous if too many part is affected.
>The Star crystals. Crystals that contain pieces of K soul also the way to resurrect him. Once a Determination wizard with enough strength dies he can resurrect from one of this crystal. Destroying it not carefully could led to damage similar to a nuclear bomb. A total of 4 of them exist on the 2 continents.
>Determination.
Determination isn't a trait. It's just pure magic power. Determination originally only has one characteristic which is survival.
>The ancient civilization: the civilization that experiment with magic. They experiment with magic and eventually created the monster race ancestors.
Their last experiment involve making determination a trait which succeeded as determination trait becomes a mutation. However they were to greedy and tried to make determination trait a war weapon, adding the war and destruction trait. This led to their destruction. The only survival of this that is still living till present time is the giant spider.
>Giant spider: after living for a long time it managed to accumulate all 6 traits. Since Determination is naturally found in magic it also can use it due to living for a long long time. It is also the one that halts human technological advancement and separates the monster civilization advancement from human's.
It creates souls parasites that latch onto souls and kill them while preserving the soul.
>Secret 4 characteristic. There is a secret 4th characteristic that is much stronger than the last 3, only appear from deep understanding of their trait.(only one person of each trait can have a 4th characteristic)
[Story arcs]
-Capital arc: their daily life after moving to the capital. There are several events that happen.
-Job hunting. The older siblings went to find a job, all find their respective job beside Ken.
-Meet the monsters ambassador. Ken meet the monster ambassador, who was quite surprised by his soul.
-Premonition of destruction. Ken meet a wandering monster seer, who warns Ken of his soul destructive power. He also joined the police force.
-Aoi likes money. Aoi was also born in the slum and hates the poverty there. After being teached by Ken about various business methods on Earth, Aoi creates a company selling the fascinating items Ken told.
-Nasha and Hans arc: reveals Nasha past.
Nasha was once a genius in the wizard council, reach 2 high grade characteristics in the age of 18. She has Hans as a disciple, who was also quite talented. When she was 19, a war broke out and she was told to go and observe for experience. Seeing the cruel scenes of unnecessary slaughter, Nasha demand the council to take action but they didn't. The council at the time was corrupt and sided with the strong, not wanting to move. She tried to find help but there was no one thus she moved on her own, assassinate 3 council members before being caught and exile from all 6 big human's country at the age of 20.
Afterward she wandered the land, supporting several rebellion before stopping. She was lost and didn't know what to do until she met Tok and Hubris in the slum. She originally wanted to raise them in peace but soon a rebellion reaches out to her, targeting the council. She thought about replacing the council with the young children that has faced unfairness thus agreeing to the rebellion.
Hans were too young and scared to help, which made he felt guilty about her. But because of Nasha reputation he was also frowned upon and face discrimination. He has a love hate relationship with Nasha and they reunited in a bad way making their relationship harsh.
The rebellion in the slum final was the one she was in but they didn't inform her. It failed and Nasha was reach out to one last proposal, to assassinate the Bravery member of the wizard council, the last one she didn't get to assassinate before.
When in the capital she tried to do so but saw the Bravery member has changed for the better and hesitated which got her caught after the rebellion members betrayed her.
She was sentenced to execution but the Ken and the others refused to let it happens. They talk with Hans and learn the truth, deciding to side with Nasha.
Ken reveals his determination soul and ask for a royal dual, in which the winner can gain a wish from the country.
He dueled with the princess and although his strength and skill is no where near her, Ken relied on the rules that the one who step out of the marked area will lose(the area is around 1km). He baited her by provocation and released all his determination aura to intimidate her, making her take one step back and losing.
Nasha was saved and have a talk with the kids, after which they becomes a real family and take on the family name 'Eisha'(Ei from eight kids and Sha from Nasha, meaning the eight kids of Nasha)
Hans also talk with Nasha and resolve their grudges, both restarting their relationship as family to see through their past.
-The research. Ken finished a research of souls about the natural suppression of magic toward magic. This makes a huge change to the world, especially kindness wizards.
-Sahra And Gero. The two were approached by the kindness organization, now the government of the kindness country and Sahra were asked to become the princess. They agree after some twist and turn.
-The 'truth'. Ken confronts K about the truth. K then told the 'truth' of the red king and himself and Ken decided to move to the monster continent.
-To the monster continent. After picking out a team, Ken move to the monster continent as a wizard council apprentice member.
-Red king cult. After going to the monster continent, they learn about the past after the red king died and his 'plans'. Their first move was to remove the red king cult.
-4 Star crystals. Ken destroy the crystals below the monster continent and went on a journey to destroy the 3 other crystals while the monster is dealing with the red king cult. Ken meet the giant spider in the travels. He learned about the past and the ancient civilization. He found and destroy one more crystal and only 2 is left.
-All out war. The red king cult was more deep rooted than they thought, having control over 3 major human countries. After being pushed into a corner they started an all out war against humans and monsters. Ken died.
-Amalgamation. Ken died and resurrect by one of the crystal, breaking it leaving one left. K said that he is 'helping' Ken to not be invaded by Arthur soul, but can't hold on for long and Ken need to go to the void to kill Arthur himself. Ken found the fourth crystal but it has mutated and turn into an amalgamation of soul. It was impossible to kill but Ken managed to pacify it. Ken didn't trust his chances and went to the giant spider for a plan with the amalgamation.
-The final. Ken spent his last days with training before confronting Arthur. They had a fierce battle. Ken won by using the replica miniature Star crystals created by the monster head scientist but was stopped by K.
K told Ken that Ken soul is now link to his and if K die Ken does too. K knew Ken value his life very much. K told Ken about the thing he found when researching the void, a place called the Beyond. K wanted to go to the Beyond and becoming a rule, something that hold absolutely control over that aspect. K wanted to see the world beyond simple civilization.
K ask Ken to hand over the soul nicely, and that Ken can watch him. K promise to not do anything to the world Ken was in and was sincere.
Ken also reveals his plan. He has used a special made parasite spider from the giant spider and use it to keep the soul amalgamation in his soul. He kills the parasite and take in the amalgamation, affecting K due to their soul link. Ken rapidly merged with the amalgamation while K tried to use force to make it forcefully obey his soul. In the end K failed but he didn't seem distressed. He only said to Ken that he is making a mistake in a calm manner. K then got merged into the amalgamation leaving Ken alone in the void. He was still merging with the soul amalgamation and losing himself, using the spider parasite to stall for time. He knew he can't return in this state thus Ken wander the void.
The end of the story ends with this:
"The red star shines brightly in endless space, moving toward the future."
>the story officially end here but there's 3 more epilogue arcs.
Epilogue 1: Ken returned to the world but he is unconscious. 6 years have passed since he went to the void and everyone went to visit him. Although unconscious there was a record tape. The tape was like a diary with Ken telling everything he wanted to say, from his reincarnation to the fight with Arthur and other truth.
They soon faced with a disturbing facts. The record turned weird after day 34 and something seems to take over Ken. They were left with a choice, to kill Ken or whatever has taken over him of trust that it's still Ken.
Epilogue 2: tell the story of Ken/ Simon Lex while he was on Earth from the prospective of the doctor responsible for taking care of Ken.
The doctor saw Ken will to live and was inspired by it, eventually being saved by Ken from depression.
Epilogue 3: Happily ever after.
Tell the story of Ken when he was in the void and the after story of all characters.
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