Slime In The Marvel Universe [Lost]

LV 11

Da_Wall

The only real problem I have is your writing style of sticking (minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus) everywhere. When you place your literature on an app that has an auto read function. That's because most people use the auto read function. It's jarring to start playing a story when you're driving down the road in your vehicle and all of a sudden. The story stops, and you hear (minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus) for 5 to 10 minutes. Most people use this app in this way, so if you have these minuses and other such things eating up space in your literature. The auto read function will just start saying those things. You have entire paragraphs of (minus minus minus) in your story. Most people will see your story. Think it's a great story. Get it and start listening to it, and then that starts, and they immediately stop your story from playing and erase your book from their library. You should have 5 times the number of people getting your story on this app. It's a decent story, and other than the paragraphs of (minus minus minus minus.) It's well written. Remember when a computer uses Text-to-speech. It says what is in the literature. If you want a pause or a space between something, it's best to use periods. Usually like this. . . . That would give you the desired effect.