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As you read the story of the boy, you will learn how he grows stronger step by step and until he reaches the point where he becomes one of the strongest people in multiverse
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Escribe una reseñaThe book is quite interesting, every chapter is well-detailed shows writer's dedication. Bravo to the author and keep it up. I recommend it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty cool storyline, with good character development though there were a few grammar mistakes which were quite easy to overlook nonetheless >.< Highly recommended book, great job Author ^.^ [img=recommend][img=update]
A promising story with a slightly interesting plot. A lot of things to work on, especially your grammar. But anyway, good job. Keep it up author.
the novel was Interesting to read, the plot was a little alluring, and I would like to see where it goes next, keep writing dear author. good luck
A good story with an interesting plot, you will immediately be interested in reading more when you start reading the opening part. Great job author! Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
From the starting, it made me amazed and love to read to the end. it has a great potential.. amazing workpiece [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
From the start of the novel, it gives u chills to read on more. This book is great. The writing is so smooth. Loved the plot. It is marvelous. With no doubt, this book is great. It will surely reach the fans. Everyone should read it. Great job, and good luck
Story is alright it's just there are very simple that can be improved like making system dialogue in bracket like this [ Welcome, Host ] or making first letter capital at start of sentences and stuff. Otherwise, good work and do you translate this manually or do you guys use AI? Just curious.
Amazing plot. Highly recommended novel. Author did a great job in character development and plot making. Keep updating. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The story is enthralling and amusing for a start buy i think the grammars need some corrections. Apart from that everything is perfect and interesting. Keep it up author [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
This one is a bit rough around the edges, but it could transition into something interesting down the line if cultivated properly. Structuring the story a bit better is probably a smart move, and correcting some pesky grammatical mistakes. There were some unnecessary and inconsistent capitalizations. Work on the main character some more, but that's a given. Overall 6/10 premise. Keep working on it. A pleasant experience.
From what is seen as of now this novel has potential We are just waiting for the new updates. Hopefully we will se more soon. The story as of now has only shown the basic background info. there is no indication if the character will be the lowkey type or the normal model protagonist. All in all this novel gives me Hope. Ps is there raws for this.
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the nivel isn't good , I don't know where these other guys who sat this is one of the best they've ever read even came from, the grammar is really bad, author please use grammarly to proof read before posting ,it helps. the mc and the story are so straight forward and one dimensional it's not even funny