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There will be R+18, but in later chapters.
I was given a choice, or maybe it could be called a wish.
Well, in my late 40s, I did not get married.
Thinking how dying and getting a wish from a god was just a dream. I ended up asking for a really weird wish of reincarnating into another world of anime.
After all, their world looked so fun and they had such odd personalities that I wanted to experience it, even if it was only in my dreams.
'Well! I got my wish.'
'My memories were sent into the body of Yuki Rito.'
'During that time, I had a high fever, like every week to merge my memories.'
From there, started his scumbag life of love & lust.
[Harem System Initiating.]
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Escribe una reseñaLooks solid, the grammar is quite good and though there are only 5 chapters I like the way its put together. Keep up the good work author. [img=update]
lets see how this goes... First, Lala is the BEST girl. followed by her 2 sisters, mikan yami, mikadp, tearju, mea, nemesis and finally Run... maybe Kyoko.. but fhe rest? meh. i hope the plot is good, the grammar decent and that you can write the girls personalities good
well, this has the start of a good series as long as it doesn't get dropped midway. so, I hope you keep up the good work. the writing and the plot have a good starting point and I don't see any grammar errors so that's a bonus in my book. as long as the updates are stable you'll have my power stones permanently.
I don't know if this will replace my last review but here goes: 1: don't care about the negative reviews or comments, those people weren't going to read the book anyway so their opinion doesn't matter. 2: the plot is good and it's a fan-fiction so take all the creative liberties you want. just make not to lose the plot in the process. 3: your grammar is solid and you have a great start just keep up the good work. 4: as long as the story doesn't get dropped midway through and the updates come in on a regular basis you'll have my daily power stones. 5: NEGATIVE PEOPLE, REVIEWS AND COMMENTS DO NOT MATTER. WRITE HOW YOU WANT TO WRITE AND IGNORE THE REST. 6: HAPPY WRITING AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Autor Alazy_Boss
it started good but author decided to mix anime worlds and change mikan and rito relationship, it could be a good To Love Ru Fanfic but its ruined now, meh