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Rose : My Ultimate Prize
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I am Xavier Brooks
You might say I'm suffering from delusions of grandeur, but nah, far from it. Why would I? I have it all, I'm a god, people bend to my will, I'm the centre of attraction, my parents are the wealthiest of parents, I get what I want, I have the brains. Like I literally have everything. well that's what I thought; that I had it all.
Until an angel made me see the light, made me know that there are limitations in our perfections, that these imperfections make us perfect, make us unique. The angel made me feel brand new, like I have found a part of me that had been missing.
I bless the day I met Rose...
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I have completed my first novel. I need reviews guys, as it's gonna help me know how you like it. Thanks.
The Story's not bad but All the describings seem like bragging and it would have been better without those braggings and Kindly check the spelling of each and every words. And the grammar is good😇 Now I am half through the story....so, I do not know the overall concept. So please just take these as a comment from a friend and please don't take it to your heart..."The only Writer whom you should compare yourself is the writer you were YESTERDAY"...So don't get discouraged and just keep Writing🙂