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Ash died and in rewarded for all his good deeds in life so, he decides to be reborn in the DC universe.
I do not own DC or any of its characters. I own only Ash and my other OC's.
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Escribe una reseñaBegginer Author whi have too many plotholes and non logic power and idiotic system who have ripoff personality who scamm the buyer why nake him have toi many points just to weaken him in the next second why dont this author just give him normal thing and evolve it to his liking..... and just please rewrite this book and fix the your power and scammer system plotholes
Your story premise is cool, and system setup seems okay but the execution leaves much to be desired. Him using the avatar while he's still a baby is frankly irritating, just do a time skip. And management of abilities is lacking, his first cultivation technique u seemed to ignore it when he got it, he could have used to train his body.
Revelar spoilerTill now 17 chapters have gone but not a single element of DC can be seen by far. MC is given 20 billion karma points for his life saying he has highest karma in 10000 years and then we get to know that all the usefull powers and skills are fuc*king expensive 😡. Why give so much karma if you want to nerf him so much... The MC is weak as fu*k in a universe with people like superman, darkseid, etc.
i read this novel......not much in these ........a baby few days old doing business with the help of his avatar.....if he trains...then its ok.....but really ....business....atleast start the business when he is 7 or 8 years old....if his avatar done all these business and mainbody does nothing....basic main controls avatar.....but here he split his mind main body has 10 percent intelligence of original.....please rewrite or after mc born 1or 3 chapter about family and timeskip to training or education,,..he has cultivation method but all he does was business...being a baby for 6 years he could cultivate...then create avatar for business likes of it........start good.....baby should enjoy some family....his father went for business trip...basically he had done the same...worst processing......
A **** novel full of plot holes, excessive powers that destroyed the story with many stupid characters. Is impossible to read more than 3 chapters
Al ver el primer capítulo de esta novela pensé que tenía un "gran potencial" cuando aparecieron los manuales de cultivó del sol y las estrellas lo pensé aun más pero luego me pareció raro que no comprare uno de la luna y los fusionará ya que el aspecto de yin-yang más galaxia debería crear algo más poderoso como el caos primordial o algo más fuerte luego a pesar de ser un cultivador no templa su cuerpo y deja el manual inútil lo que parece más raro ya que no veo como me comprende que un cuerpo fuerte lo ayudaría a protegerse a el y a su familia teniendo en cuenta que tiene la habilidad de prestar poder y podría darles el poder de su físico no diré nada del avatar ya que, si hubieras Saltado en el tiempo todos estaríamos felices no teniendo capítulos innecesarios como los del capítulo del empleado y los villanos que son papás fritas de momento y lo único de lo que servirán será de como nos muestras como el MC se vuelve más OP por cada ticket que el sistema le da por sus misiones sin nada especial ya que Superman es un niño y Batman no es Batman
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Revelar spoilerPretty good to read this. Only thing is I forget the plot after 6 days😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Trash novel I wanted to give the author more time before judging it to harshly but with it being drop here’s the rating it deserves as of now
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Dude the novel is amazing and please more updates since the novel already new it needs more chapters to understand it, also please don't be brain dead author like some Chinese novels makes someone got a wish for being kind and so on then turn into a killer in next life.
Not bad novel but not great. Dislike different perspective thing, do like his abilities Hope he KILLS lex Luthor reverse flash, the thinker and the joker. Will he introduce batman to mana
It's a pretty standard novel,a mc gets transported into a world of his/her choice because of "good karma" and gets some OP system or cheat. Don't get me wrong this isn't a bad novel it's just not an overly amazing novel either, it's more or less in the middle. Keep up the good work author,story's going relatively well.
A very confusing story from the very beginning and has now been dropped.....................................................................
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Autor MokeyBoy
The premise and the powers chosen were good but the execution of the system and powers was lack luster. The mc conciusness being separated from his body for long periods of time would have raised suspicions. Overall the story lacks a logical progression.
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