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Capítulo 10: Chapter 10: The Escape

The echoes of celebration had faded, leaving an unsettled stillness in their wake. Though the charges against them had been dropped, Élise, Jean, and the others knew that Robespierre's reach was long. He would not forget those who opposed his tyrannical rule.

The friends gathered in Élise's parlor to discuss their next moves. "We have tasted freedom once more, but it remains elusive as long as Robespierre maintains his grip on power," said Father Louis gravely. 

"Each day he consolidates control, another day liberty is at risk," added Jean. "We must continue our work, but openly challenging Robespierre now could prove suicidal."

Élise knew he spoke the truth. "Remaining in Paris will only invite further danger. Our voices will be silenced before long." A plan began to take shape in her mind. "What if we were to continue our mission from outside the city? We could spread our message of nonviolence and justice throughout France."

The others readily agreed to Élise's proposal. Safety lay in obscurity for now. "We shall take our ideals out of Robespierre's reach and hope that, in time, others will take up our call," said Jean.

And so, in the flickering lamplight, the group began to lay plans for their escape from Paris, hoping to keep hope alive until the dawn of a new day of freedom. Devising their escape would not be simple. The checkpoints lining roads out of Paris were heavily guarded, and papers would need to be forged. Jean pondered their options late into the evening, shuffling papers by candlelight.

A stealthier approach might succeed where subterfuge failed. Under the cover of darkness, we could slip past the checkpoints undetected, he announced to the group the next evening. But we must move under darkness' deep cloak, when even the keenest-eyed sentry's vision will fail.

The others listened intently to Jean's plan. A cart would be needed to transport them, its cargo hidden beneath a canvas sheet. On the pretext of delivering supplies to a nearby farm, the cart could roll past the sentries under the guise of routine trade.

Once beyond the city limits, darkness and side roads would shield their flight. But one mistake or misfortune could undo them, exposing them to the terror's brutal executions. The risk was high, but freedom was the only choice. All agreed to put their faith in Jean's daring plan.

Preparations were made swiftly and in secret. As night fell, their cart was loaded with heavy cloaks. Élise's father bid his daughter a final brave farewell before they embarked into the inky unknown. Their lives now hang by the slenderest of threads as they set off into the midnight streets of Paris. 

The rain came as they made their departure, sluicing through the cobbled streets in blinding sheets. Fortune seemed to favor their flight this evening. Jean steered the cart through swirling back alleys, avoiding the broader thoroughfares.

Heartbeats pounding, Élise and the others lay silent and motionless beneath the damp canvas. Only the cart's creaks and the rainfall's roar masked their passage. At each corner, Jean paused, listening for patrols, before darting onward through the deluge.

As they neared the city limits, the first checkpoint appeared—an ominous silhouette against the storm-lashed night. Jean halted the cart beside an alley, motioning for his passengers to continue on foot while he distracted the guards.

Élise and the others splashed through overflowing gutters, guided solely by the muted glow of watch lanterns. They had scarcely crept past the checkpoint when shouts rang out—the guards had stopped Jean's empty cart. Élise fought panic, urging her companions into waiting shallows as booted feet splashed by.

After an agonizing time, Jean's familiar whisper called them from the alley's mouth. They had evaded pursuit—for now. But with sentries on high alert, their escape had become a desperate gambit against the turbulent night. Only fortune and fate could see them safe beyond the revolution's grasp now. 

The second checkpoint loomed ahead, lanterns glimmering in the downpour. From her hiding place, Élise watched the cart trundle to a halt before the armed men.

"State your business," a guard demanded gruffly as Jean clambered down.

"Supplies for the farm up the road," Jean replied evenly. "The master requests more grain and tools."

"Let's see your papers then." Suspicion edged the guard's tone—too many slipped past these days under false pretenses.

With careful nonchalance, Jean gestured down the road. "I saw some royalists meeting that way not long ago; they might be plotting an escape. Best check it out—I'll be on my way."

Intrigue won out over duty, it seemed, for the guards hurried off without a second glance at Jean's proffered documents. Élise sent a silent prayer of thanks as the creaking cart resumed its path, spiriting them further from the checkpoint's lantern glow and closer to freedom with each turning wheel. Their ruse had gambled on human frailty—and won. 

The last barricade's glow loomed ahead, casting the road in intermittent light and shadow. Jean whispered hurried prayers as the cart rolled to a halt before the armed figures.

Your business? A guard eyed them suspiciously.

Supplies for the farm. Jean kept his tone level, though his heart raced.

Let them pass, a comrade called. These roads will claim us all if we linger too long in this downpour!

The barricade was lifted. As the cart lurched forward once more, a gasp filled the air: "It's that traitor, Jean Valjean! After him!"

A shot rang out as they whipped the horses into a gallop. Peering back, Élise saw a lone guard sprinting in pursuit down the darkened road, silhouetted by flaring muskets.

They had survived the barricades, but the chase had begun. If that guard caught them now, all hope of escape would be lost in the maw of Robespierre's justice. Through walling rain and night, their lives hung by the horses' straining hooves alone. Somewhere behind, a man still gave chase, bearing down with each splashing footfall.

The horses flew down darkened alleys, their iron-shod hooves kicking up sheets of water. Behind them stretched a net of streets both known and unknown—if the guard stayed on their trail, escape seemed impossible.

Jean whipped the team onward, praying each twisting turn shed their pursuer. In the gaps between buildings, a lone silhouette doggedly gained, his baying calls carrying over the rain's din.

A flash—musket fire—stirred through the night. The ball whined past Jean's head as he banked the cart down a narrow lane. Wood scraping stone sent splinters flying, but they held their lead.

Another shot echoed, closer this time. Then the crack of branches breaking—their pursuer had crashed through an alley fence in his haste. Time was theirs, if only for a beating heart or two.

With straining flanks and labored breath, the horses emerged from the city's dying outskirts. Open fields beckoned—freedom, if they could reach them in time. Behind, an enraged shout clamored that the hunt was still afoot. But night was nature's cloak, and this rain might yet shroud their escape in its billowing gray veil. 

The horses plunged into open fields, each hoofbeat carrying them further from the choking limits of the city. Behind, the guard's frustrated bellows faded into the storm's dismal din. Darkness and distance had swallowed their pursuer at last.

Jean drew rein in a drainage ditch thick with cattails. Safety, for now, lies in stillness under the cover of night. The rain rinsed sweat and fear from grimy skin as exhausted passengers disembarked on shaking legs.

Shelter they found among rows of flooded vineyards, pulling sodden cloaks over huddled forms. No fires dared burn this close to Paris, but damp warmth was shared in silence.

As the tempest pattered its lone song upon the earth, hope blossomed once more in Élise's breast. They had endured the barricades, the chase, and survived when all seemed lost. Freedom was theirs—if they could elude the terror's grasp until its hold on France was broken. Safe in the depths of a hidden night, the path ahead seemed theirs to walk at last.

With the dawn might come new dangers, but for now, safety is sheltered in rain-slicked fields beyond the city limits. Their flight had carried them across the threshold between fear and hope—may daylight find them still free. 

The morning's pale light blurred the eastern horizon, stealing into the dim vineyards where exhausted fugitives took fitful rest. Élise stirred gently beneath damp cloaks, rousing companions from troubled dreams.

The cart was readied in hushed whispers as sunlight crested the hills. Any lingering patrols must be outrun this day; discovery now means death behind revolutionary walls.

Faces were smudged, but spirits were high as they resumed their flight down winding lanes. Behind lay the shadows of tyranny and fear—ahead, a future unwritten in the glowing dawn. Fields, farms, and forests flowed past in a blur of welcoming green and gold.

By noon, the city had vanished utterly from sight, leaving only the road unfurling into a new day. Jean glanced back at travel-worn faces aglow with hard-won hope and ahead to trails leading into an unknown tomorrow. There lay a chance for lives of purpose lived freely, their mission being spread to all who would hear the call.

As the sun strode overhead, Paris was far behind, but a new dawn had come. Beyond terror's reach at last, their journey into a new land of liberty had only just begun.


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“Each day was marked by bloody expeditions which cannot but horrify every decent soul and seem justifiable only in the light of philosophy… It was said openly that it was essential for peace that not a single republican was to be left alive in France… It was sufficient to have attended at a mass said by one of the constitutional clergy to be imprisoned and then murdered or shot, under the pretext that the prisons were too full.”

Francois Chevalier on the revolt in the Vendee

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