Reborn in originals

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Adams_Albert_7443

The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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swordsaint

Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)

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AwfulAbsoluteSweet

My original review was erased by Webnovel’s janky phone UI, but here’s a tl;dr review. As of Ch 5: 2.8/5 There are frequent tense shifts and a flagrant lack of punctuation. I find this difficult to read, and many people who don’t have English as their first language will agree. The plot is somewhat novel but there are a few plotpoints that feel forced and cringe-inducing (his discussions with God and the events with MC’s father). This is a middle-of-the-pack webnovel, but I hope the author continues with it so they can improve their writing skills and grasp of English.

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Adams2004

author's shameless review.this fanfic is all about the OC and his siblings, not everything is going to follow the canon, I'm going to change something and save whoever I deem savable.I hope you enjoy your time.

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Night_shade_

u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone

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LastGod

Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.

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QuaziY

Overall good reading material. But there's some very forced events. And some scenes just doesn't make sense. Like Esther's obsession over killing vampires, they didn't kill her or did any heinous things when she was alive. Freya being immortal witch also doesn't make sense.

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King_silvers

I love this book. it's a fresh style of The originals

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omnigodvoldigoad

it great so far keep up on updating its amazing and new

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bravo_bansal

best originals ff i found better keep it up

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Jessa_Monday

Great fic,I really enjoyed it I hope you don't drop it author, and I personally recommend anyone you have this fic to read, you will love it, it is completely different from the other fanfic out there.

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malhiharjot

It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................

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Xavierzelaya2

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Haruns_Julien

I have read this I Have to say awesome work author keep it going

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CouchPotatoDandy

Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.

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Daoistje85Nx

Are there more coming? I like it so much

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Bam729

Really good story[img=update] keep up with the story please