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Fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen universe
Imagine that your whole life is an endless toil for one goal: a comfortable and happy future. But when there is only one step left to fulfill your dream, fate throws you an incredible dirty trick. The main character, on the threshold of success, is unexpectedly reborn... into the body of Yuta Okkotsu. However, in this new reality, his life is different: Rika Orimoto does not become a cursed spirit.
Now he faces many questions: how to get along in the new reality? And will he be able to become what he would have become without the "strongest cursed spirit"?
What to expect:
Gradual development of the hero. The main character does not get everything at once - he has to work hard to reveal his potential.
The main character is an ordinary person who was thrust into a new world and we will see how he adapts to the new world and new opportunities.
. Although the hero is really talented, he will have to work hard to reveal his talent.
> This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic, and English is my third language. Please be understanding and don't judge too harshly. I really hope that the story will resonate with readers and that you will enjoy reading it.
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A Yuta self insert has great potential You can use AI to help with grammar and other proof reading works
Great work. I like it. If you work on some things,it will be great. Grammar and pacing is great. But dialogue delivery and story could use some work. also, use (' ) for thinking and (") for speaking. it is confusing sometimes. write in small paragraphs while describing something. and when talking, use one dialogue in one line. Don't make another chapter with the same content only with diff. pov just to show what the other person was thinking.(like with Megumi meeting yuta,only things diff. in that chapter was him thinking that yuta is not arrogant.) write conversation between characters just as you talk with people. Don't over explain just for readers. Him forgetting rikka and no one told him, the explanation was not good.(doctor saying to parents to not tell him). at least you should have acknowledge her properly. your reaction to higher-ups arrogance was good. It shows that mc is diff. from other fanfic mc. it was a mature reaction. no need to make enemies without any reason. yuta has family. Interaction between characters is little bit plain. not much but just a little. Btw you did a great a great job. thankyou for your hardwork.
I was happy that the MC was Yuta but my happiness ended after I read the synopsis, where the MC won't have Rika which is what makes him stronger than Gojo himself, so I won't read it
The story is quite interesting, but the chapters are quite short and and the plot develops slowly (which is not a flaw). But the story is clearly worth reading.