Hi, there author here. Someone complained that I constantly change tenses and write in the first or third person (which sucks I guess). So I decided now to use: Past tense, write in the third person, use [brackets] to display only Acedia's thoughts, and Name: means the guy with the name says something.
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Shortly after Acedia came back to the pub he rested. Yep, he just lazed around for a day. The boi literally slept through an entire day! So stupid. This morning thou Acedia decided to do something again, and that is open his Pub again,
WOOOOOOOOOOOOO YEAH BABY! That's what we've been waiting for!
[I am bored *mental yawn* I will open the pub. Mmmm who will be my next customer? Maybe Azrael...or maybe that little fucker Gon, so that guy can finally give me my MONEY! But hey let's see who comes]
Acedia then walked to the open/closed sign and turned it around. He then walked behind the counter and conjured a beanbag sitting there and waiting for a customer.
The moment Acedia sat down there was a TING-A-LING. A new customer. [AHH come on I just sat down]. Acedia immediately stood up, though he had a very grumpy look on his face.
Acedia: Welcome to Siduri...
Acedia stopped speaking when he saw the 2 people that entered the pub.
The first person who entered was of short build, had a round face, framed by a short mess of fluffy dark-green hair which sticks up at odd angles around that person's head, casting noticeably dark shadows onto itself. That person's eyes were large and somewhat circular, their irises had the same green color as that person's hair and were stretched quite wide, giving that person an innocent, energized appearance.
And behind that person was a skinny-ass dude.
WHO ARE THESE CHARACTERS?
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IT IS IZUKU MIDORYA/Deku AND Toshinori Yagi/ALL MIGHT!
[Oh no not Deku, I hate him! He is the only reason I don't watch MHA. The moment Deku talks about anything! I just close the tab I watch anime on. No front mha fans tho. I love the world setting and the idea of quirks. But Izuku sucks in my opinion] (Author: For real I just spilled my Coffee. I tell u divine Intervention. Holy shit!)
Acedia: How may I serve you two?
Toshinori: Hello! I have never seen this building before, what do you sell?
[Should I add stuff to the menu like something to eat and some products? Yeah, that would be kinda nice. I could sell him a healing elixir mmm yeah sounds good.
Acedia: I sell all kinds of beverages, I could make some food on request and I can get you anything for the right price.
Toshinori & Deku: -_-" (Doesn't sound suspicious at all)
Acedia: Btw you can sit wherever you want.
The two then sat down at one of the tables near them.
Toshinori: Well young Midoriya! Today is the last day before the UA test, get whatever you want I will pay today.
Deku: Thanks All M...Toshinori-san
Acedia: *sigh* what do you want to order?
Deku: I you-would like to have Katsudon and a green iced tea, please.
Toshinori: And for me a Steak and a Coke.
Acedia: How many grams? Just kidding, small, medium, or large you 2?
Toshinori: medium (what the duck is wrong with him)
Deku: medium (I didn't understand the joke....)
Acedia: Alright coming right up
Acedia then went behind the counter filling a glass with coke and another glass with a green iced tea. Then he returned to the table delivering the drinks.
Acedia: Alright food will take a moment, I will turn on the music if you don't mind.
Toshinori: No problem
Acedia then turned on the speakers playing some youtube radio music and left the two to go to a separate room to conjure a kitchen.
Deku: All Might, don't you think this place is suspicious? Built-in one night besides our training ground and then that comment at the start by the owner?
Toshinori: We will see, I will ask him for information later.
Deku: *gulp* WOW! All Might this is the best thing I have ever drank!
Toshinori: *sip* You are right young Midoriya this is the best coke ever!
Meanwhile Acedia is in the kitchen:
Acedia: Well now it is official I have no talent for cooking. Let's go on a trip.
We're going on a trip to a place calle Yukihira
Zooming through the sky, Little Einsteins
Climb aboard, get ready to explore
There's so much to find, Little Einsteins
We're going on a mission, start the countdown 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Everyone to rocket, rev it up now RRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
We're going on a trip in our favorite rocket ship
Zooming through the sky, Little Einsteins
Climb aboard, get ready to explore
There's so much to find, Little Einsteins
Come on, let's go, Little Einsteins
We need you, Little Einsteins
Yeah!