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Sirius dreams of a normal life, but his fate is anything but ordinary. Haunted by visions of a battlefield and a crown of salt, he struggles with his seemingly weak Salt Weave in a world where powerful soul weavers fight to protect humanity. Despite believing his abilities are insignificant, Sirius begins to uncover a hidden power within him, tied to a forgotten past. As darkness rises, Sirius must face the truth about his legacy and unlock the strength he never knew he had.
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Escribe una reseñaThis novel has very good grammar, it is pleasent to read and only suffers from slight repetition with certain words and sentences. The first 13 chapters are confusing and the action is somewhat hard to follow, but it sets up a background for future development, so please read all the free chapters before deciding to continue or not. Because the story is actually quite good so far and has lots of potential. Author i hope that you continue to include the other characters in a meaningful way, because i wory this will become a story where the mc is the only one capable of handling things. Such a story can quickly become boring and repetitive. Otherwise you are doing a good job, make sure there is character development as the story progresses. *I like how sirius actually cries a lot, since he is a kid that makes him realistic as well, some authors just make the mc emotionless beasts from the beginning.
Autor Dark_saint_3
Hey guys, shameless author, here to review my own book. A Personal Reflection.... Perfect Abomination is, without a doubt, my most ambitious and refined work to date. This novel brings together everything I've learned from my previous projects, combining intricate world-building, character development, and a well-crafted narrative arc. It centers on Sirius, a protagonist fated to face a god-like enemy, Genesis, in a world teetering on the brink of destruction. However, this is just one of his many journeys—one that will take him beyond the bounds of his world to confront even grander forces. The Story of Sirius: At the heart of Perfect Abomination is Sirius, a character destined for greatness, but one who must earn every victory through grit, intelligence, and persistence. Though he possesses remarkable potential, I’ve made sure not to make him an overpowered protagonist. Each milestone he reaches is built on a foundation of hard-earned success, often through moments of trauma and growth. One key moment in his early development is his first venture into the Abyssal Plane as a child, a traumatic experience that ultimately fuels his quest for power. A World in Peril: The backdrop of *Perfect Abomination* is a world under threat from a god intent on devouring it. Special individuals, known as Soul Weavers, wield unique powers to combat the god’s minions. However, even though this system plays a role early on, it isn’t the endgame for Sirius. Soon enough, he'll explore new sources of power, widening the scope of the world and his journey. This allows for an evolving sense of scale, making the story feel larger with each chapter as Sirius steps into new realms and confronts more complex challenges. Epic, Yet Personal: While the tone of the story spans a range of emotions—from dark and foreboding moments to lighter, more personal interactions—it leans into an epic feel overall. This balance is something I aimed for, to ensure that Sirius’s journey, while immense in scale, always remains grounded in his personal struggles and victories. Though supported by friends, this is his story, and their roles, while important, remain secondary to his path. Is Genesis the end goal: While Genesis serves as the distant and seemingly final foe, I have much more in store for Sirius. Genesis is a stepping stone on a much grander path, one that Sirius will traverse as he grows stronger and more cunning. The conflict with Genesis is important, but it’s not the ultimate goal of the novel. What lies ahead is a journey that will push Sirius beyond even what Genesis represents, in ways that will surprise readers. Writing Perfect Abomination has been a deeply personal and satisfying experience. After years of honing my craft, this story represents the pinnacle of my efforts—a combination of world-building, character evolution, and a narrative that is as much about the challenges we face in life as it is about epic battles. It may be the beginning of Sirius's tale, but it's also the culmination of my journey as a writer. I sincerely believe this is my best work so far, and I can't wait to share it with you readers who will experience Sirius’s growth, the expanding world, and the high-stakes challenges ahead. Also, i am open for any questions and doubts you might have about the book. Alright guys, hope you enjoy the book.