Percy Jackson: Never ending Amagedon

LV 4

Amera_Mee

I think it needs some more detail and clarity, but it has potential, And good writing makes it more engaging. Good luck Author! I'd recommend it.

LV 1

KetchupxD

It's good but there are many noticeable grammatical and punctuation errors, anyways has the potential to be better. 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters

LV 2

Jaffaaaa

My school mates review: All in All good story line. I like the characters and revenge in general. A bit to fast paced for me in the beg beginning but I know it’ extra. All in All great chapters and language I enjoy reading.

LV 3

pink_lollie24

This book is a real treat for fans of Greek mythology, like the Percy Jackson series if you loved that, you will love this one too. I think the story has great potential but the author has to work on trying not to be too repetitive. Overall the descriptions and the world building should be taken up a notch. Keep up the good work author!

LV 2

Junethephatcat

I am a sucker for mythology and seeing that you had base your novel in the son of a titan, i was instantly attracted. Basing your Mc on the son of the titan that holds Olympus on his shoulders is ingenious. I like the premise of your novel and your prologue. Keep up the good work!!

LV 2

ReyRizS

For real the chapters are to short don't ublish if not 1k words but it has an intiristing story it has a good plot also its a bit fast paced but overall its ok i would say 6/10 I hope you improve and work hard also it has a few grammatical error but you can always change that so yeah.