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Overlord: Pro transmigration
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Overlord fanfic... English Grammer not good... Just for fun... Btw this is AU so there will be great changes...
A YGGDRASIL number one PvP player and a streamer was transmigrated over to the New World.
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I swear to God if this get drop like every other overlord fanfic, you shall know pain :V.
come on man! for god sake continue this!! its would be a shame to abandon such a great idea. OC Orsted in Overlord thats interesting and it give me a rush of excitement. please continue this idea, it would be a shame to be left like this.
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i saw the first chapter and hope this orsted is actually up for the game, interesting if i have to say definitely reading it but please put more chapters and stop rewriting every time, i really want to see this
typos and grammatical mistakes here and there but still readable, story has an cool mc with interesting backstory, but his personality is a bit too lukewarm and shallow? its a bit confusing, story is closely linked to the overlord original in the first few chapters, so far so good
At least give a character sheet. And especially what kind of beings he can summon. Ffffffffffffff gggggggggv BBbbb bbbbbbbbb bbbbnnnn nnn
Overlord + r18 = 5star. I didnt read it yet, but just want to encourage author to continue writing. Ill edit this review when i read this.
Only 5 stars because of Overlord, because every Overlord ff get's dropped or is in a hiatus. I can't say much because it has only 1 chapter, the "bad" parts are that cliche change Albedo from s*ut to love the mc (you get the drill, it's not really bad but like said cliche especially because the mc does not know about Overlord, and does the exact same as momonga.) and emojis for now he only used three. But i suggest that the author should stop using it, even 18+ scenes because it's just unfunny has no meaning or better said purpose, it's ridiculous (thank god the author did not spam emojis, and hopefully stops it "for the greater good") if you want to you can go multiverse with this. Just let him have space,void ability/manipulation and his "old" world had anime etc, and then go with whole nazarick to a another world later on. Because like i said, most drop Overlord ffs so yeah...anyway Good Luck. And don't treat the woman in Nazarick (or more like everywhere) as s.e.x toys pls, treat them normal.