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The story talks about a young and mysterious boy known as Cloud who aspired to become the greatest pilgrim warrior in Agaroth (the first warrior realm of mankind) despite his flaws, however there is more that meets the eyes as Agaroth is on the brink of extinction and the very evil that made Agaroth is slowly returning.
Now as Cloud gets stronger,not only must he learn the true meaning of strength but he must also discover who he truly is and deal with his internal conflict as well.
NB: The story contains violent scenes that might be disturbing for some viewers . Also this book is a beta version of the original.
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Writing quality is stellar, updates are steady, and the world building is nice. For how new and fresh it is, this story has a lot of engagements and comments. That shows that people really like and are into it. Almost 5 stars but the only thing I would add is description of what the characters look like and some description of what the environment looks like. Sometimes mentioning smells, taste, how someone is dressed can increase immersion in the story. With that being said, I wish you the best author. You are welcome to have a look at "Avatar: Lingering Tensions" which is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". You may want to read the first chapter of AMJ or so to get a feel for what the first story was about. But AMJ's tone changes so much that you really won't know everything unless you read a lot of it. Still, the story is written in a way that explains the essentials. It also is better if you've watched the canon motherseries "Avatar: The Last Airbender".
Okay! I can't wait to give the review! First of all, it's all about the adrenaline rush. Right from the beginning of the story I was on the edge of my seat!! Every chapter has at least one fight and flashback that opens doors to the past of leading characters. Although the grammar and typos could use some revisions, using Grammarly would quickly fix that!!! The story is super engaging...and there is a mystery right from the beginning that begs you to read on. I am in love and will keep reading this book...until the free episodes are exhausted. If you love fighting manga and anime, this one will not disappoint you.
this novel is perfect, the combats and the characters are too good especially the characters, every one of them has their own mind, they have a past that who build them into what they are now, and the pictures in every chapter for the characters make the read easier, I recommend this novel for everybody who likes the big stories, and one of the best things there are no stupid characters
I only read the first chapter, but it seems promising. The writing is flowed and the characters seem interesting enough to hook me in. I might update this review after reading more.
Great work! A well written 'weak to strong' story. I was able to understand how the MC would be feeling from the situations presented in the first few chapters. It was clearly and descriptively written. The story development is the next thing that captured my attention. A story inside a story is a fabulous idea! This is very well executed. The world background, of course, there is more for me to explore since I'm still at the beginning of the story. The characters in this novel are pretty interesting, motivating, and at times, funny. That is a good combination of characters. Also, I like the title of this novel. Overall, it is an exciting novel with an interesting plot. Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
your story has a unique touch to it. At first I was a bit sceptical because of the cover but once I read it, it blew my mind. This is where the saying that don't judge a book by its cover comes in.
Very interesting idea, I was a little thrown off by the title but after reading a bit of it, I was pleasantly surprised! Also the characters are fleshed out well and the pace is greatly done!
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author .I enjoy your work . recommended:)
I loved the first chapter honestly, one of the characters is funny (not spoiling), i like the theme too, i didn't think i'll like it that much but i do. Good job, and the writing too, finely written. [img=recommend]
Your story is very unique, neatly and i like to read yours. I must read soon, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] i will collect to my reading list too