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New devil in multiverse
4.07 (11 valoraciones)
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THIS IS JUST THE FIRST NOVEL I WROTE!! DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY,
So this is the new Idea I had for the novel so I made a new novel but after I deleted it I thought why did I delete it instead of making a new novel?
So it's like I forgot to make a new novel and remade in this one instead I am sorry .
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Sypnosis-
What would you do if you did a lot of good karma but still died by the hands of your brother no less whom you loved....
Before getting abandoned by your family because of him.
This is the story about the man who died by the hands of his family who did a lot of good karma but still got no positive responses.
How will he enjoy his last chance given by heavens to re live and what will he do in the multiverse .
Note- mc don't have a hero syndrome he will help out some poor people out of pity but will not save or help anyone if he is not in mood.
read to find out
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this is my first time writing so i will give some less stars to my novel but when my writing gets better and I get more reviews I will write another review for myself xD
idea is very interesting and the story has potential and if you can ignore little grammatical mistakes then you will have no problem regarding this novel
The idea of the story is really good but the problem Comes from the bad grammar and writing I think that if the author would use something like grammarly or simply proof read his work he could fix most of his problems
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Learn the basics of the language you want to write in before attempting to make novel. This ff is the perfect example of learning to walk before running. Iq dropped by 20 points at the minimum.