Looking around Vain saw an endless field of golden grass looking to be wheat or barley. The only strange thing was the grass's height which seemed to not be able to grow any taller than four feet. The air felt both fresh and like the air on a cool morning day. There was no sun in the sky, instead, it looked to be cloudy but not dark.
Looking around Vain couldn't see anything other than the golden field, so without an option, he started walking along the endless field of wheat.
Also, I left level 10 out of my story first since it had so little cohesion with my story, but the rewrite truly helped it become something more.