Needles

LV 4

DoNotConsentToAdds

Reviewed at chapter 14. Read it, liked it. It is 6:40 in here and i need to be at work at 9 and i have no regrets. If you like Naruto fan-fic's that go to a little more detail on how things work i doubt you will regret picking it up either. Writing Quality - 5* i'm not really picky on this part as as long as i don't have to wrap my brain around MTL jenga i'm happy, if there were missed capitalization or (s)he errors i probably missed them due to being drawn to the story enough to forget about them by the time i was reading the next sentence. Stability of Updates - 4* The writer has mentioned that they are a student working towards their masters so expect less chapters during exam season. All in all i'm impressed that they have the energy to post anything as i could hardy get out of bed when i was a student. Story Development - 5* Slow burn, no going Super Saiyan 3 by chapter 5 in here. MC is slowly working her way trough life and i feel that her decisions on what to do, when to do it and how to do it are all explained in an easy to follow manner that makes sense in the context of the story. Also i'm partial to Female MCs so i might be a bit bias ;) Character Design - 5* I Like the MC so far, there have not been massive info dumps on who she was before reincarnation and i'm happy for that as i prefer to get to know the characters slowly and it gives the authors more leeway when deciding the direction they want to take them later in the story without completely rewriting their expected behavior from one chapter to the next. The supporting cast also seem to also be behaving in a plausible way given the story setting. World Background - 5* I always like it when Fan-Fiction writers try to give a fresh perspective to already fleshed out words and working to develop existing consents further, for example in this story there are some creative ideas on chakra manipulation that i hope that the author will continue to dive deeper into as thought experiments like that on the inner workings of it kept me reading for more.