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Naruto : The Fire Fist Ninja
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Naruto is cast aside by his parents for his siblings, whom are jinchuriki. Watch as he burns his own path in life with the power of his predecessor and the eyes of his sensei. Will he show the world what a will of fire can really do. Does it mean the will to fight to protect your village? Or does it mean the true nature of fire?
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Terrible. Makes the story really au just to push the sob story further. Makes kushina and minato brain dead parents for no reason. Randomly forced one piece characters in the lore just so Naruto can just be ace. Naruto is a genius and has a strong fire affinity so he could invent those juts but no, let’s make Ace one of kaguya’s children.
Typical neglect background where Kushina and Minato somehow forget that they have another son, but this time he turns out to be inheriting the legacy of Ace from One Piece, who has been given a new Naruto-style background. Chapters lack progression so the story is overly drawn out and it becomes a chore to read through and is boring and feels repetitive at times.
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I suggest you should rewatch Naruto and read more before continuing the story. Your story is build upon a soup opera with little to no progress. The story is so messy that it's neither an AU or related to the original in anyway. You attempt to write a sad introduction and failed because I don't feel sad for Naruto one bit. You attempted to show how sad he is while not thinking how he's being treated in the original. Naruto didn't break but grow stronger but some neglecting would make him go crazy? Also the whole neglecting premise is just stupid, you either make his parents evil and neglecting or not at all. This is not a Cinderella story and he's is not a step child. Can parents have favorite? Absolutely, but to the point of absolute neglecting? No way.
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I really liked the fanfic, which in turn is strange because I am a person who has seen more than 70 Naruto fanfics and I liked this one the only thing I didn't like is the strange obsession with ACE, but it's not something I'll stop reading
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Most of the time it feels like the characters change their personalities to make certain things happen, most of the characters development occur instantly which was what really put me off. I didn’t mind this interpretation of Minato and Kushina or the random one piece insertions… It just felt like characters acted a certain way to force the mc to follow the author’s plot. Example: Just because minato and kushina had to focus on their other children doesn’t explain why they completely forgot about their other child -Kushina for some reason just kept having irrational tantrums and bad arguments. -Mc’s sister completely changed her bad attitude after hearing his true thoughts without any true introspection. -Minato lacks a spine and is pretty much nerfed. -Jiraiya is portrayed to be overly obsessed with the toad prophecy to the point that he got dumber. -Everyone treats the mc badly for no real reason other than the other siblings need more attention.
So bad I literally stopped reading and went back to study for the Sat's1)No character act like they normally would.2)The plot in itself is bad.3)The background that the author gave was horribly badly written.4)I suspect the author has never read nor seen Naruto.Even for an AU, this is so badly written that even, me who never writes reviews can't help but criticize itOn the positive side, the author seem to update regularly. Just like my trash, it appears after a certain time.
This is a full Fanfic or could even be called an original story if it weren't for the characters we know from Naruto. This has nothing from the canon, a completely different story at its own pace. And although it has several inconsistencies, I personally liked it, the development of the story and characters is very good, recommended
This is how fanfiction should be.. a creation of the writers vision and not a redoing of Naruto. People are so dumb nowadays thinking the writers should follow the lore of the original series. Having a little lore and more creativity is how writing should be. Great work and if people complain how “Naruto isn’t like this”, or “you don’t understand Naruto”, are just Whitney children that already had a vision of what they wanted but got butthurt when they didn’t get what they wished. Keep writing.
This "author" is a thief, a snake, and a disgrace this isnt even his fanfiction. He copy pasted this from a novel that was dropped back in 2015.
Look man, if you want to write something, then at least make it so that it makes sense. It's like you are forcing your way in there. Nobody just forgets their own son no matter how bad they are. So this work of yours is just a joke to me, because others may like it and it's ok it's their own choice but to me it's...
Messy story, little plot development, a very basic and overused idea for Naruto fanfiction, the only memorable medium was its insertion of one piece characters and in the end even that disappoints
That’s bad, really bad. Minato and Kushina are awful in this fic for no reason, also why don’t you just make 4 parts of Kiuubi? I mean in this fic his chakra seems to be like a cake, you can divide it into any number of pieces. And yeah Ace don’t suit well in this fic.
I love this novel. I hope it continues. I really want a novel to have fun with. I'm tired of repetition. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This novel is the one I'm always looking forward to read. the concept is going by the main story, but with a twist making integrate really well.
Story is good but a bit generic. This thing about Kushina and Minato is too exaggerated. There's also this fact of western names being used in the book. I don't know how you view it but Otsutsuki Ace doesn't sound good, nevermind Portgas D. Naruto. Would've been better if it was Uchiha Naruto. Either way, I get that you love Ace and good for you. I also won't expect you to go through every chapter and change the names. But I do sincerely ask that if you're ever going to write a book again, please just add a bit of realism and not be generic. And the most important part, please don't put different cultural names together, especially for a main character. It hurts to read. Some of us are still suffering from the trauma of Bob Uchiha and Zeke Uzumaki.
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I'm loving this fic so far. I don't know why people are complaining about this not being similar to the anime, this is a fanfiction.
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