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Lin Yu accidentally traveled to Uchiha Obito's body while watching Naruto at home
The first thing he did was to retrieve Kakashi's Sharingan and achieve double Kamui!
Send away Madara, kill Black Zetsu, with double Kamui in hand, I can move freely in the ninja world!
Longdi Cave, Shigu Forest, Miaomu Mountain, merged with Sanlong, incarnate in freedom!
With the will of the people, the Ninja Nation was established, with immeasurable merits and honors, he ascended to the throne!
The body of an immortal, the eye of samsara, and the ten nixi seals, reproduce the power of the six paths!
From the sky to the underworld, my life is only for freedom! The past can be thrown away!
He is bound to overthrow the big boss and the future is promising.
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The story looks good, but the name changes make it wierd to read and try to guess whow is the character that is speaking or is being talked to. I will bookmark it, but probably only read after a re-write that fixes what i said before.
Was not able to get through the first chapter what shite is this? Is this just machine translation from Ping Pong because it is not chinese translation
Please go through it and fix it please this fiction has potential but it really needs to be fixed