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Alex grew up in a wealthy family with parents who were both successful businesspeople. From a young age, he was taught to view the world as a series of strategic moves and counter-moves, where success was measured by power and absolute dominance. get it absolute dominance
oh and now I'm in naruto great
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This moves at light speed. There is no development for what I hesitate to call characters, it's the most repititive fanfic I've ever read once you've read 2 chapters those sentences/paragraphs repeat about 6 times a chapter. The MC is a mess. The only words spoken are the exact same "planning dialogue I it's insane how that would simply be released for readers on this state. Action scenes are also just unimaginative and repeat every time. early on he plans to take a group of hyuga and Uchiha by suprise and does it again twice it's so insane. this barely qualifies as anything to be honest my best advice is work on being better at literally everything no joke.
Author here i can't promise a stable update if you've seen the last novel i wrote i haven't updated a chapter in a year due to sudden events and i kinda wasn't in my right mind to update another thing given how little is known about how Kirigakure is built upon other than the caste system from what I've read in the manga and ln its hardly talked about so I'm basically making my own timeline and stuff. events that more prominent in the manga and anime will be there some changes will occur but ill try and keep it familiar also for right now no romance I'm not a good writer nor do i think i can write romance genius tag is there for the mc but as always the mc is only as smart as the author and I'm not that smart but ill try :(