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Naruto: One Eye Tenseigan
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Alternate Title: Naruto: One Eye to See
Another Reincarnation Naruto Story. (Slow Pace)
Spoiler: Tomaru’s presence brings a butterfly effect; Naruto does not learn Kage Bunshin, which causes him to lose his right hand when Team 7 first encounters Zabuza.
As a novice writer, I do not have sufficient experience in writing, and often I feel confused about how to construct sentences or develop ideas effectively. When I write, I tend to just pour out what is on my mind without considering the proper structure or grammar.
If you can look past these errors and recognize that every writer has an initial stage they must go through, perhaps you will find some value in the stories I present.
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Only 11 chapters so far and it’s been good and shows potential! Keep up the good work!