Naruto: Maelstrom Of The Uzumaki

LV 10

q25t

The pacing is really, really bad. The plot moves at a breakneck pace only to jump directly into timeskips. Battle scenes are particularly bad as there's absolutely no consistency of any character's strength so fights are entirely random. MC is shown to have learned quite a lot of sealing and some ninjutsu but no techniques are named and his setups of seals are never described so it appears all his seals pop out of nowhere. Side characters don't really have any depth and act like their canon counterparts, ignoring that the story takes place decades prior. MC getting Kurama is positively stupid, not for the fact that it happened but everything surrounding it. The sealing is done somehow on the mental plane by MC with Mito standing by. The whole plot is supposed to be secret yet MC as a well-known genius disappears off the face of the earth into enforced seclusion, which might as well be announcing that Mito died to everyone. Very stupid. Then to top it all off, Danzo tries to use some sort of curse seal on MC directly in front of the hokage and elders and absolutely nothing happens to him. Then Danzo does so again at MC's house while also murdering several Anbu and leaving behind copious amounts of evidence it was him. For this, Danzo has Root reassigned to another Anbu but nothing visible to MC. Like I know a lot of fanfics have Danzo do some outrageous things and Sarutobi doing nothing about it but this is absurd. The homage is also supposed to be MC's teacher and apparently Danzo trying to subvert both a strategic war asset and the hokage's student in one person gets a slap on the wrist? Really?

LV 2

FirdausBudin26

I just hope author didn't keep Danzou alive for to long, Lot of AU Naruto Shippuden's writer love to keep Danzou alive until late in their storyline like why do you all love him so much? Kill him before he kill you,

the story is good for now, hopefully it will always be updated because in the raw it is already 400+ ch 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

LV 1

Daoistbe94JV

The idea is good, but the implementation sucks. There's a lot of crap going on with the hero power. For example, he owns Kagura's eye, but instead of using it constantly AT LEAST in dangerous situations, he only uses it when he is already under attack. The protagonist's progress is completely messed up and impossible to track. First we are shown what a genius he is in seals, but he rarely uses these “brilliant” seals. His use of the lightning element has not been revealed, although there have been attempts.