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During the Third Great Ninja War, facing numerous enemies, Mirukawa Kaito was not in a hurry, and his hands quickly formed seals.
"Water Style: Water Shuriken"
"Lightning Style: Thunderbolt"
"Ice Style: Ice Beam"
"Lava Style: Precipice Blades"
…
Everything returned to calm.
In the messy battlefield, Mirukawa Kaito fell into deep thought. He looked at [Focus Sash] on his left wrist and [Mystic Water] on his right hand.
After a long silence, he threw the newly obtained [Onion] hard to the ground!
"Damn! I am really a Pokémon, right?!”
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This is a a Chinese fanfiction. I am just translating it.
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The premise seems to be the mc has a pokemon as a summon and a system that rewards him with pokemon items and is having his adventure in Mist. So far it's fun. There isn't anything negative that stands out for me. I like the mc and the side characters are getting enough attention.
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I'm not good at giving reviews but I'll still write Good story nothing flashy from the right of the bat, consistency in power scaling he is not op from the start, fairly easy to keep track of all the abilities gained through the system it's not like where he gets all legendary skills and equipment in 2 ten draws, a wonderful read it's shows development which is different from Canon and gives freshness to the story
I think the story is extremely good and engaging. The character development is great and the power is proportionate. I hope the author continues the story. Thanks for the translation.
Considering this is a translation from Chinese; so some of it is literal, it is not the worst but as a born English speaker it sometimes grates; but it isn’t the worst. I like that so far he only has the one Pokémon as a summon and has thoroughly developed his relationship with him. While at current his abilities granted by the lottery system make him around Jonin level, he doesn’t appear as a god-like/broken character. I like how it deviates from the basic plot we know from canon, but given that it is focused on a village we don’t know much about and characters that have a fair bit of room for more depth, the story is very good for a Chinese translated story. It doesn’t mean it’s for everyone, but I personally like it and can’t wait to read more!!
I like the story and mainly the use of Pokemon moves as jutsus ,I hope author keeps this up.
It’s a pretty good story. Definitely not the best Pokemon or Naruto ff, but regardless it’s an easy read and the writing quality is decent. Keep up the good work author!
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La verdad no tengo nada que criticar, el sistema lo hace lo suficientemente fuerte como para que sea entretenido pero no como para que sea exagerado, la personalidad es divertida, añadiendo algo de color a los protagonistas oscuros, paranoicos y melancólicos que siempre presentan los fanfic de Naruto. Me encanta el planteo de las habilidades y cómo la ha combinado sin desentonar con el canon.
Anybody know if there’s an mtl of this anywhere? I really wanna keep reading but I can’t find this anywhere else but on qidian.
la historia es bastante buena, se adapta a mi gusto y incorpora elementos externos ( pokemon ) en un historia que conocemos desde otra perspectiva este tipo de fanfics me gustan mucho
estou realmente amando isso! especialmente pelo MC tratar o mundo como real, não como fã vendo seus personagens favoritos e querer estar perto deles e salva-los dos seus destinos trágicos. Sua sobrevivência é a prioridade!
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Pretty great story here, I like the system, the techniques and rewards, it all fits surprisingly well. The Protagonist being born in Kirigakure is great and his future team is nice too. I have no real complaints, it’s just been a fun, good story.