My randomic road to power

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Charreos

great idea, the relationship is a bit forced and out of nowhere but would make sense with the circumstances, unlike a lot of trash fics the conversations feel natural and people are not just cardboard, waiting for more (chapter 10)

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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

LV 4

JT_The_Polar_Bear

Enjoyable dialogue, slightly rushed relationship developments, great fight scenes and character development. Looking forward to more chapters.

LV 5

carrotpie

It’s a somewhat good stories but it has some flaws . The main one being how the mc is a major hypocrite. The mc’s whole goal is to be the “quirkless hero” but thing is he does have a quirk. Its not literally a quirk but he has multiple diffrent powers and quirks are just powers . Its like saying your not racist since you don’t hate Chinease people but then you say that all Indian people are idiots and that you hate them .

LV 4

Blackwhip

Hey author, can I continue and rewrite this novel?

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Sabyasachi93

Good start. Like your thinking style. Don't drop please. Instead of pure physical warrior try both physical and mental path. But that is just my opinion. Ultimately it's your story and you decide what your endgame is.

LV 14

ASexyCrow

Like it’s good but I don’t know if I’m trippin. To me I feel like the MC simply can’t care and it will only get worse as the series goes on. When Mina asks for them to take a break because he was starting to scare her, his only realization was, yes he is becoming a monster but “so what”. With this I feel like any chance for him to show any real emotion is gone and I feel like he is nothing but a shell for the author to write a Giga chad mc who’s so sigma that all the girls fall for him and he loves his women but also could care less because he only cares about get more power. With this thought in the back of my mind is what made me want to stop reading cause I didn’t want to read a story about a dead shell who can’t only falsify his emotions to appear human to those around him. Like I don’t know if I’m just trippin and over analyzing but I couldn’t stop viewing the series like this.

LV 4

Jai_pareek

this is good, i do question wisdom and intelligence at one occasion or two but other than that, it is fantastic. this ff needs more power stones coz this can develop a whole lot

LV 4

Blackwhip

It has some good potential. Great fight scenes, but forced character interactions. The Quirkless Idea brought it all down since he is technically not quirkless. And instead of slowing his progress, the author introduced magic to the story. The writing quality is mediocre too. Sometimes, mispelling and grammar mistakes happen, and occasionally, there are some parts you won't understand. It is a refreshing read but, it has big flaws.

LV 13

Fenrirzero9999

Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas

LV 12

Krypton71

Caught upto Ch26// It’s decent in my opinion. Not the best, but it has some good potential.

LV 14

God_of_hentai

This is really good i hope you choose someone other then mina for the love interest BUT SO FAR ITS SOOOOO GOOOOODDDDD

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AbelWizard

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SinnersLaw

It's a decent read for when you're bored nothing else tbh .........................................................................................

LV 14

Readingaddict018

Loving it not many storys with a tank/berserk mc looking forward to see how it progress.

LV 4

ludo1234

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BoBeR_KuRvA

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interman

really good novel but the update rate brings it down a bit. overall one of my favourite novels.

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Arion_Sturmklinge

I hope you never stop posting chapters ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________