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I'll be rewriting this book all over. There are lots of mistakes in it. The next few chapters that I'll be uploading is to complete the plot I made for the new story. Please ignore this book and check out my second book.
Xin, a sixteen year old kid who is the rightful heir to the throne of Erica kingdom, faced an unexpected predicament as he was on his way to save his father and mother, who were the king and queen respectively, from being killed by his father's cousin.
On his way to rescue his father and mother, Xin discovered that he had been transported to a parallel world where abilities were being used and a world crisis of alien invasion was occuring presently in their world.
Xin is a smart genius who spends all of his time proving formulas and theories that scientists of the past had discovered. Of all discoveries, he tend to love the discovery of a parallel world and he had read millions of books that proves the existence of parallel worlds.
But what surprised him was that his parallel self whose name is also Xin, used to exist in the parallel world he's in, but scientifically, he also might have been transported to Xin's world.
The 'Xin' was said to have been in a month Coma but upon seeing the real Xin, everyone thought that 'Xin' had woken from Coma.
And Xin had no other option but to pretend to be the previous 'Xin'.
But there's a war going on in this world, A war between Aliens and Humans. And every human had been told to learn an ability inorder to win against the savaging beasts.
Surprisingly, Xin got a system which was activated by the Omnitrix (a watch created by his father and said to be able to store different types of abilities), and with this system, Xin would learn how to control many types of abilities, and the tide of war would shift in favour of all humans.
But still, there is an enemy that Xin had to defeat. That is his father's cousin, the controller of time and worlds.
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Due to several complains dealing with grammatical errors and mistakes, I decided to re-write this book. First, English is not my first language and this is definitely the first longest book I ever wrote. I didn't regret writing this book anyways. I learnt a lot from the mistakes i made and then decided to write a new one, thereby avoiding the mistakes i made in this book. It won't be the same title. They look similar.. but different. It will be a different storyline. I hope you will like it. I apologise for the inconveniences in reading. The new book will be out soon. You can check out My Triling System too.
The story is great so far and the idea of it is quite fascinating. The power seems amazing so far being in the middle of to op and not too op. The only con I have with this novel is that the MC lacks intelligence. I mean, a simple analysis could render a conclusion with any event here that would've saved time preventing him from asking questions and progressing the story faster. Although it's a good way to show info dumps it makes the MC's intelligence look so low. The MC is too bullied by the story that it doesn't show much growth. In a good story, there should be a rise and fall, fall being bullied and rise to show the growth of the MC but with this novel its almost like fall fall fall fall rise fall fall fall.
A really well thought-of storyline. Very few grammatical errors, but worth reading. Chapter updating on point. Well written and hope to see more of it ☺️💫.
From the looks of the cover it’ll be nice. I can’t wait to read it I’m looking for books to read so I’ll it to my library. I think I should start reading it now
WOW.... Great story with a super concept. The synopsis is so attractive. No words.... Keep it up. All the best 👍. [img=update]
The novel feels interesting. The author tried adding elements from other works and it has blended nicely. Hoping to see more. Keep up the good work.
Wow, I have no words to say but to say this author is a genius, the book is awesome, fully respect to author who can write novels with a system which I thought it's so hard, and this book is written so nice, really curious in what happens next! [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very compelling story with a hooking synopsis. Added to my library ASAP. This is the type of fantasy that would keep you coming back. Nice work.
According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, I felt it was a bit too rushed and there were lots of info dumps in between. It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right. I really love the concept of parallel worlds and the ability to travel through dimensions. I hope the author improves the quality and makes it much more exciting. I suggest the author to read novels and see how the other top authors do the story telling. It'll be helpful for you. All the best.
This is my very first review but I'll say that this book is really wonderful. Although there are some errors which I would like the Author to try and correct. I'll pinpoint them in my chapter comments. Thank you!👌💛💚💜
The opening was rlly interesting, definitely different than what I’ve seen before. My only complaint is that the writing doesn’t seem smooth if that makes sense, it feels like something you wrote for an essay, not a novel. Other than that, the book is good.
Love the concept of the story! Please continue writing this and hopefully things will get interesting soon! ^^
🌼Don't get your hopes high, there's no spoiler from me😂😂😂 gagagagaga!! 🌼 Fooled you!! gagagagaga!! 🌼 Even though I'm typing this I'm not laughing. 🌼 Fooled You again, I'm laughing, gagagagaga!!
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My OmniAbility System in a parallel world? What a weird title... well, I'll keep on reading and give out the support I could give out. just keep on updating as much as you can.
I wish I could drop lots of golden Tickets for this book. But I promise to do so once I have. This book really worths it. Keep on giving me those Vibes 😎😎
While certainly tropey and generic at places. There's no need to re-invent the wheel. While lacking in experimentation the presentation is excellent with an easy to follow writing style. This stories are an aqquired taste but one you'll be glad you got hooked on.
I thought this book would be a sci-fi story but gladly it's not. It is a system book whose characters are a bit funny and the protagonist is kinda cool. Add and read this Novel, you'll thank me later.
its to similar to my vampire system, it seems like a continuation, spinoff or something like test, blood swipes, the blade family....
I'm currently on chapter 5. I commend the pace of the story and the dialogue. but the cons of the chapter I just read through are the grammatical errors, lack of character description and world design. it feels like a normal person reading a movie script. Overall, I'm happy with what I read😊😊 The opening chapters set up a war between parallel realms. let's go🔥🔥
I'm not actually leaving a review, I just wanted to show my appreciation towards my loyal readers who showered me love by gifting me 32 golden tickets for September, by sending gifts and power stones and for the honest reviews and chapter comments. I want to say a big Thank You for giving this book a chance. Though, to some readers, it may not suit your taste while on the other hand, some merciful readers had showed me how much they loved it. Thank you so much, although this book might be lagging in one way or the other but I assure you that my third book that will be participating for Next year's WSA would be better than this. Your comments and suggestions on this book will make me create a wonderful story that will at least make you glad while reading. Thanks to all who read this review, kindly like it to show your support, I'll really appreciate if you do so.