My Netori System: The Graceful ones

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ArchbishopOfSloth

Here is the author. This story is not serious I mean in another way. Of course, Netori is assumed as Dark so that will be a little rape or not. I still don't know . I myself don't like to write mind break character and doll so rapes are my enemy. This is not serious. I just write to expand my fantasy . I still don't know Updating Stability I have my shitty College and work. I can only say I will try. Please advise me, guys. I have no plans ahead for this fanfic. Recommend me what should I do or write in this fanfic of mine.

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Yuri_is_Ntr

Is this review biased af? Yes! I mean let's be honest, writing at the start was confusing, but it's a got a bit better now. And I'm come here for title not for some serious works. Did I got what I want - YES! YES! YES! Can you even ask for more? P. S. Shota is okay, and playing with older sisters is nice, but I still ask for him to be older. (did I lied? I'm a devil!)

LV 10

ArchbishopOfSloth

I thought I should make a review for future readers. 1, English is not my native language. I will try to write readable and if you can withstand my English you should try my fanfic. I am also trying to improve my English skill. 2, MC is reincarnated as Hentai protagonist and his journey started at the age of 5(means SEX). I will try to avoid it in the future and I can not fix plots because I already wrote. 3- This is a mix of Multiverse Worlds and Dimensional chat groups. I will not add Marvel, DC, and game characters. 4 - This series main focus is on the Netori.Harem will probably go massive but I don't know sure but I will not add like ' MC take 50 slaves that kind of things ' in my fanfic. I will write every character. 5. I will not add Clones *** and amnesia or memories loss. MC will have memories for every world he is going to face. Thank you for reading.

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HOLYDARK

When I saw this, my first thought was To Love ru and Dxd. The can go on but I will stop for now. Note this is a pre reading review just based on seeing the title and the previous work.

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Yuri_is_Ntr

I wasn't expecting full on netori book without side-activities, but I am very disappointed in this novel. You ask me why? Even if writting of the first chapters was iffy and later its become better. First chapters show mc that I could believe, that's wouldn't be a quivering pussy with girls and could take what he wants. Exactly what's netori about... It's got worse. Right now he have no differences from bipolar harem mc's. Means he could do something naughty, but only when circumstances is right. Tsunade already roll him over as her **** toy. And new arc in konosuba, don't make me optimistic either...because all girls in chat actually op, and he trying to be nice to them... But hey, let's talk about something more interesting. Power - levels. It's screwed...like oh my God. Fairy King that kills god of energy, actually feel threatened by some princess of great clan from campione... So you better understood. In campione, all those great families and prominent magicians, was Canon folders. On the level of magicians from dxd. That's how useful and strong they are... Killing God and becoming campione give him only boost in magic and authority of controlling energy, especially divine...sounds cool, right? No use, no explanation, nothing. Girls like saeko who get some wind ability or momo, or mayuki actually sounds like big shots...dude, no. Just no. And hestia now multiverse? goddess and have a great force in different world...shouldn't only her avatar come in another world. Either way, God's from danmachi was losers that's can't win over one black dragon. Which only have a size of city. Sounds great, but nothing impressive. I guess sekyuritei from dxd - maximum. Conclusion. I wouldn't even mind author lack of knowledge of anime that he used. Because novel should be about stealing girls and making harem. But hey, apparently that's a lie... I am not even angry, just disappointed.

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NjalLeif

Was starting well at first but then it went downhill. The author started giving importance to all the other worlds he can think of except the main one. Work on that and I may change my review.

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Paladium

Books for all man of culture. Netori will safe this world. .................. ......... ..... .... ...... .... .. ............. .... .. .. . . ..... ... (Yes the same comment)

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TintedvCeo

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Andrewstewart002

This is very very story i think i m going insane after so many wrong spelling.The authour always changes the System what is wrong with him if he want y he not call her sytem lala and second i think its ntr story but y he kill Tsunade brother insted of saving after that he can capture Tsunade this is bullshit 😒😡🤬👿😈

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jeanpierregerardo

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jeanpierregerardo

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Xerstoren

Bad grammar, hard to read. MC is a psycho. Shotacon 🤮 The story flow is rushed and the system doesn't help either. That's the most important points I've seen so far. It's a pity though, the premise is interesting but those forementioned points killed my interest in the novel. Don't know if the author will edit the chaps so he can make it more bearable but for now it is what it is.

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Doist0000077785

Author San novel story was a little confusing at the beginning but in later chapter it was has quite a good story line a little bland but it doesn't matter cause it's fun reading this novel . So I appreciate your hard work and like to say that don't drop it in midway and plz release new chapter

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Jack_OFFICIAL

Hello I am new in these novel. I like some idea of these .I want to know is these novel will dropout or not. I dont like half story . If these novel will not drop out i will start reading these novel.😎😎🥱🥱

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Ar_Tong

I wait to see for To love ru world in this fan fiction, since author use the image of Lala as a cover. So I hope I can see them and I will change my review after that.

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Thaft

This is a very good FanFict novel and it fits what I was looking for and according to my criteria, especially you include Mayumi and Tsunada, also I like the luck and intelligence of the MC, even though your English is not your mother tongue, at least you can read it quite well. clear. I hope you keep growing and, if you can, have the Crazy Up event on Christmas Holidays. Cheer up, Author!

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kyo_sneaky27

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Ringo_Haruto_09

the story is nice but it's kinda bland in how you use words. well it is still a nice story as it has an interesting plot, it only for me though.