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It's the turn of the 21st century in a world not unlike our own. 14 year-old Michael wakes up on the first day of high school with a nosebleed, a splitting headache, and the voice of someone claiming to be him from a number of years in the future in his head!
"We could have been, and we need to be, better... so, congratulations, I'm sorry, and good luck!"
Stuck with a somewhat overbearing voice in his head that seems hell-bent on ruining his life, Michael will have to survive such ordeals as... doing well in school, eating right, exercising and... learning demonic contract law? Stay tuned to find out!
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Alright so first ever review. Ok so any future readers if you want straight op mc, fast pace plot mc, massive info dump, massive face slapping mc at the beginning of the novel and arrogant for no reason antagonist then this isn't for you. If you like slow built up, well thought up reasons how and whyhe is becoming stronger, More realistic system then you probably usually see then this is might be for you. The mc gains a system from future him for a very vague reason that he did something extremely messed up in the future or something. Now the system grows with him and what I mean by that is since it came from the future it can't bring many things from the future or it will break time so mc has to read up books of various things so the system can help mc make a plan for him to accomplish amazing things in the present and the future so he can overwrite what messed up thing future him did. Now mc obviously tries to get system to teach him about things that the system said he can't tell him without unlocking things. Kid just start highschool and the story is extremely slow at the moment like day by day hour by hour slow. This book does have magic and there are very strong people. This story is focused on a made up land and has lots of things made up but somehow follows Latin empire history. There is no kingdom building so far but luckily there is no mass info dump either so far. He gradually gets to know the place he is born in and the back ground of it very slowly. It's set in a modern era but with a medieval details. And what I mean by that is there are empires and also colonies and probably kingdoms but also computers and the internet and also vehicles transportation with cars not horses and carriages, and probably weapons of mass destruction, on top of all that there are in fact sometype of cultivation/magic involve but it's all behind the scenes and only few people know about it and the mass is ignorant. Just think of Harry potters background and relate it to this but without the drama of the destin one and you probably understand what i am thinking of. Also the system is not an emotional piece of crap just lots of sass. Point is the story so far is well thought of. Ah also so far there is no harem or mass killings or any psychotic people so far so if you like massive gore and other bloody things you might want to come back way later in the story because so far everything is pg-13.
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This is quickly turning into one of my favorite stories on Webnovel. The MC, Michael is relatable, the System is snarky, and the advances he is making are incremental. He gains increases in stats in .001 increments, so he although he may become OP at some point, it is going to take a while. I like watching the MC work for his rewards.
Quality of writing- Above Average Stability of updates- Stable Story Development- So far, good Charcter Design- Interesting World building- Too soon to comment A novel with an interesting original premise. Has good potential. Would be very pleased if there are more chapters with the same or higher quality of content. Keep up the good work!
I very rarely give 5 star reviews on stories but this one if it claimed to deserve 4 stars no other author would dare say there's was worth 5. I am absolutely smitten by this story and the authors style, it feels like I'm reading something I've lost long ago, but what is it that I've lost? Joy. I havent gotten joy from reading in a long time, but this one, it makes me happy in an Indescribable way, I feel like I'm on a high while reading this, i love it.
Storyline - Rebirth in modern era (Personal favourite) With a hint of mysticism MC Personality - Not too OP, more like building himself to become powerful Story progression - Still in the early phase of MC building himself, slow progression and no time skip with each day progress mentioned overall a little too slow build up for my liking , though it’s one of my fav books but here I am being very objective here Just a bit of caution to author, for now the slow build up is good and preferred but you are slowly inching towards the line of making the book boring and you must speed it up a little, but it is a book which deserves 5 star for now
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This is quickly turning into one of my favorite stories on Webnovel. The MC, Michael is relatable, the System is snarky, and the advances he is making are incremental. He gains increases in stats in .001 increments, so he although he may become OP at some point, it is going to take a while. I like watching the MC work for his rewards.
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Story is well writen, realistic and enjoyable so far! I love the way how Ml and system talk with each other.................................
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Still the best thing since sliced bread. chapter 33 introduced magiccccc boom bada bing, the librarian is a wizza XD 140140140140140100411004014014100401440
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Hey there! Author here - I hope you enjoy my novel! It's my inaugural work and I'm learning as I go, but I real all feedback and try to interact with my readers as much as possible.
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Although I didn't read too far (before getting a little bored), I'd say this story is really great! It kept me focused on the story for about 45 chapters, until I just got a little bored.
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This story is a slow and steady reveal. The writing, characterization, and intricate plot are excellent. Over 50 chapters in and the story is still changing. Can't wait for the next installment.
Absolutely amazing job.. please continue the work.. Looking forward to it. Loving the sci-fi element. The story premise is good and if looking for slice of life I would recommend more interactions of mc with family and friends. Some Character development of his sibolings may do some good. Food for thought Cheers!!!
So far this series has been amazing, its well thought out, near to none grammatical errors, and fairly realistic. It has a system thats more of a helper than an OP tool. The world building is very well done. The authors doesn't give the entire history of the world in one go, they slowly give small info dumps and hints about the world making you realize this might not be earth and you're left craving more. This series is only about 20ch in when i made this review so take it with grain of salt. But ive been seeing very small hints and foreshadowing that this novel will become a sy-fi action and it is extremely well done because you don't know if its true or not, it makes you think. And when a novel manages to make me go back and read to see if the hints might be real I give an automatic 5stars. Summary/Pro's -well thought out -small but precise info dumps -not OP system/character -overall entertaining -so far amazing worldbuilding Cons- -It's basically a slice of life rn (but that could change in the future) -story pace is kinda slow -stop making me want moar Like I said take it with a grain of salt, the story is only 25ch in, It can easily change.