My First Test

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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Trim_2cool

Author review? Nothing new. However, I will actually give some pros and cons of the book with a short book description for those that dislike the synopsis. What is the book about?: (First Arc Only) Its a fantasy based world with lots of magic, where Ojero and Orpham are brothers. Both are the sons of a duke, with Orpham being the heir. When they turn 14, both are blessed with mythical powers (The rarest), with Orpham gaining light and space based power while Ojero gains Time, Shadow, and a [CURRENTLY] unknown power. The story revolves around Ojero's evil and cynical personality and how it causes friction between himself and his brother at Lumenbecs Academy, a very prestigious magic school. Pros -Unique magic system that had a lot of time put into it. -Evil MC! -Brother conflict that makes sense and allows the characters to stick to their roles. -Active updates? If you have notifications on, this may very well be a con with the constant updates ;) -There will be a romantic subplot -Clear notification when swapping character POV's. (Ojero is default) -Constantly changing map of the continent to show change that the MC doesn't directly cause. Hard to imagine the MC not causing every little thing in the universe, but try to stick with me here. Cons -Its my first work, so it may not be up the par with other novels. -Not too many chapters right now -Word count per chapter isn't too much. (Trying to increase it) -Evil MC! For some this is a con. -MC's are pretty powerful.

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Unubold_Uunuu

this story is good some times i just lost it about the tiers o wanna know about can they rise its tiers or will it be still ? and what rarity can start with what tiers ojeron has 2 more core he did not break maybe 1 can be necromancy then it can maybe cool and hope author will stabil about updating and one question is ojeron handsome or not ???