My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer

"Hello readers, this is my first time writing a fanfiction so the writing might not be great. If you notice something that is wrong with the writing, please inform me. I hope that by reading your comments, my writing will get better. Thank you."

LV 14

Destroyer404

It is a good first few chapters. The only thing I'm complaining about is whether the characters are either thinking or talking. I couldn't move past the first 2 chapters because of it. The premise is good, but please fix it (I'll delete this comment and review after the author fixes it).

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Sole_on_fire

Not good, but could be improved... Some dialogues are missing quotation marks, which makes it hard to know whether a character is talking... . Regarding the story... Just another MC following the protagonist like a lost pet.. He's supposed to be OP but he isn't applying his gifts properly... Also he isn't using his metaknowledge properly, he acts as if he's an OC that doesnt know arifureta..

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AstrumShadow

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OXCL

It's rare to see Arifureta fanfics, and so far there are 2 heroines, but please don't overdo it, so far it's very exciting, but the grammar is very messy, sometimes the quotation marks ("") disappear, and the conversation between two people blends together, like people A and B chatting, usually limited by quotation marks, and different paragraphs, but sometimes they come together, but I'm used to it because I read MTL novels and updates please more often ch19

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Red_eagle

I love the story so far..its just hard to recognise dialogues.do something about it

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Crow_Myth

Honestly, a very good read so far Keep up the good work

LV 4

hale_valenzuela

moreeee moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I like the story it's so good some people might bash you but don't think of it they are just jealous of how great of an author you are

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Bocifer

Really good for your first Work, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Dreams_Reader01928

Every thing is good accept the romance part. I mean he could have done so many thing well whatever.

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Elemise

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Irvin_Arellano

I like how it is multiple worlds and that he impoved that quickly

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ArdaPendragon

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Tiuh_Gojo_Senpai

Trash, mc with no thought of his own, acts like a pet, and a background character, trash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trash

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Silke_Stoff

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Johan_Flores_6614

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Shady_Emad_

Great work ヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(≧▽≦*)o.

Overall it is good. But the Updating takes way too much time. It is fine to take a break if you upload as many chapters as possible before doing so. There are less Arifureta based Fics, and I really like it. So, hope you will write more often.