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MISSION: Make her fall for me

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Love was nothing for Stella Cruze, the daughter of Magdalene Cruze, the  most puissant,dominated rich woman in town with a lot of companies.Member of a mafia clan and her popularity centered on her domineering demeanor and  overwhelming wealth
Taking the first place in ranking of wealth.
Stella was overwhelmingly beautiful and so attractive but inherited the domineering behavior of her mother.Stella ,as the only child of Magdalene already inherited Magdalene's wealth.
Love was nothing to  Stella ,to her love was a waste of time that always results in pain.
Apollo Dun was the son of the Don,Lucus, the most dangerous Mafia boss.All Apollo wanted from the day his mom left was to make his father proud but it seemed like an impossible dream since Aaron Dunn, his step brother —same age—always got in the way.
Lucus got diagnosed with  Alzheimer's disease and was going to die in two years.
All he wants before his death is to take the first place in ranking of wealth.So he tells his sons to take control over the Cruze Empire.
But how can this be done without falling for the  attractive Stella Cruze.
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"Don't try me Apollo"Her words conveyed anger but her voice showed how much she wanted this.
Apollo held her chin, lifting her head a little."Or else?"he asked with a smirk.He didn't comprehend why he was enjoying this.Fine, because making her fall for him was easy than expected but it felt like he wanted this and he didn't comprehend this feeling.
His closeness made her heart pound so fast.She felt her chicks turn red.Stella looked away and struggled to free herself from his grip.
"Just..leave me alone"She said.
"What if I say I won't?"Apollo asked with a grin ."Just admit it Stella, you want me"He added.
That he said was true but she was too stubborn to accept it . Love was not on her menu.
"Dream on"
Finally she removed her had from his and walked pass him, catching her breathe.Then, suddenly he pulled her by the waist .
They were close to each other and their lips were a mere inch away.This was the best chance for Apollo to do what he wanted from the first day he set his eyes on her.....To kiss her.
They both stared at each other's lips.
"You better be ready for this."Apollo said.
"W—what—"She felt his lips connected to to her.


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Clairemade

Hello everyone, this is the author speaking. I know it may be annoying to write this review, but here it is. The story I wrote, titled ""MISSION; MAKE HER FALL FOR ME," isn't the best, but it's not the worst either. I acknowledge that there are likely mistakes throughout the story, and for that, I apologize. Rest assured, I am actively working on improving my writing skills and hope to deliver better stories in the future. Before I start this review, I want to request that no hate comments be left in the comments section. Please, I implore you, don't write any hate comments. They really break my heart, okay? Haters gonna hate, hate, hate, hate, hate. But I'm just gonna shake, shake, shake, shake, shake. Shake it off, shake it off. Let me be honest with you all, I can't even believe I brought my weird side here, haha! I know, it's crazy, right? But for real, please, no hate comments okay? I would seriously appreciate it. Listen up, dear readers. I know it's exciting to read MISSION; MAKE HER FALL FOR ME, and I appreciate your time and support. But please, don't forget to leave a comment! Your feedback really matters to me. Also, if you've enjoyed it so far, don't forget to leave a power stone. This will help others find this story and get the opportunity to read it. Your support means the world to me! Friends, I must confess - your feedback is extremely important to me. Your comments provide valuable insights and thoughts that greatly contribute to refining and improving the story. Whenever I receive a comment, no matter how small, I get incredibly excited. Your input really means the world to me! So remember, don't be shy and drop a comment whenever you can. Even a single comment is greatly appreciated and extremely beneficial for creating better stories. Dear readers, I cannot stress enough how important it is for you to leave a review reading the book. Your feedback is priceless and incredibly helpful for improving the story. So please, take a moment to drop a review and let me know what you think. It means so much to me and makes all the difference. You're right, I admit that the story is not complete yet, but I assure you that I am actively working on it. In fact, I'm already thinking of the next chapter. However, I really need your support and feedback to keep me motivated and inspired. So please don't hesitate to leave a comment after each chapter you read. Your thoughts and opinions are really important to me and play a big role in shaping the story. I kindly request that before leaving a review on the story, please consider reading a minimum of 10-15 chapters first. By reading a substantial portion of the story, you'll have a better understanding of the plot and character development, which will allow you to provide more meaningful and informed feedback. Your thoughtful review will not only benefit the author but will also enhance the overall reading experience for other readers in the future. Haha, you got me! This whole review was all about getting more comments and reviews from the readers, and I'll make sure to let you know if anything comes up. So thank you for reading and for leaving a review!

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