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MHA: Son of All For One
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A boy created by experiments from All For One is thrown away like garbage. Now he is left on his own to choose who he wants to be. So he chooses to be a hero.
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I like the Plot, You just need to Improve your writing style cause you have a strong structure for a great story. AFO's Lab born child adopted by Aizawa. . 3 things : 1 - You have a pacing problem you skip a Lot, You have a Character who is really trying to understand human emotions and you skip all the emotional development (more like Rush through it) 2 - Like i said you have to improve your writing style, If you wanna type names type them like this [Haruto: "i am here..."] [Aizawa: "Prove them Wrong"](Talking out loud) or [Haruto: 'what do i say here'] (for thinking).. or maybe like this [ "i am here..." Haruto said in a broken tongue] (no need to add bracket obviously) 3 - This is more a personal message but dont make it Harem .. i repeat No Harem. . Thank You for your attention. 😊
the the background quality was good and the character is a little bit not a human like but if if develop it's more like it but the upload update was not was i think about it
Overall it has potential, the grammer could use some work but it can turn into a great story. Please just no harem, one FL is enough.