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MHA: Second chance
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A very young boy, dying of an incurable disease, only dreams that his torment would end sooner. But instead of a sad end, his life begins again, in another world. A mysterious girl in black has changed the boy's fate. Allowing his dreams to come true! Given a second chance, what will the boy who never had anything do? In a world where there are heroes! Villains! Quirks! And even catgirls (bunnygirls and more =))!
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rough writing, there are no misspellings, but he doesn't separate talking of different characters. So the readers don't know where the talking ends and the thinking begins. Need to put space between paragraphs and personaly I would prefer if you put the dialogue of different characters in different paragraphs. cool idea just needs improvement in writing quality
Writing quality: it's hard to understand anything. story development: iIcouldnt reach past chapter 4 cuz of how bad his English is. character design: same updating stability:idk world background:couldn't reach. if you don't want to think about every word the author has written, then this story isn't for you.
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