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MCU: Ultimate Ghoul
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Frederic was the disappointing son of an active soldier. Frederic spent his life trying to show the world he was capable despite his weakened body. Frederic tried. He tried with every fiber of his being.
Yet it wasn't enough. Because at the age of 26, Frederic's weak heart gave out and he died. Afraid and alone.
But it wasn't the end. No. Instead, Frederic found himself in front of a giant wheel. God's Wheel. And with instructions to spin it...who was he to say no? After all, when promised another life, any normal person would say yes. Especially someone with such deep regrets like Frederic.
...This time, he would prove to everyone he was capable.
(A/N - Right, here's the thing. I want the MC to be OP...but that ruins stories. It takes away suspense and makes everything boring. So, I'm settling for a strong MC who will get stronger with time through his own training and external things like serums and whatnot. Don't expect the MC to be an edge lord either. Oh, and because of the Harem tag, you bet your ass that I'm gonna twist some characters and make them fit my story. Don't like it? Don't read the story.)
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Anyone who has a problem with the fact that the WRITER is using a FICTIONAL species for his character is really dumb. The story is really lit and has a lot of potential as a whole and I believe that with the powers (even now that the ghoul part has been changed) are really good. Hope to see more from you soon :)
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Wow . . . . . I am so excited for more!! Damn first fanfic to point out how harsh is a goul's hunger, but a question is beg to be asked which is, What will be his Kagune? I wish it could be Eto's One Eyed Owl, add he should increase his regeneration to reach the level of Noro (he was almost like a freaking Immortal!!) Slowly develop to their level, I am not asking for him to have them from the start ofc; since it will only ruin the suspense like you said.