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Duke, a young man awakened his X Gene to become the conduit of the Speed Force, a multiversal cosmic concept in the Marvel Multiverse
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The writing is decent and the start is seem interesting but is actually future events that is instantly a negative, and the protagonist is super smart that knows everything but his life, current situation and goals are not interesting or well executed, instead of realistic events and world introduction the plot turns into high intensity fights and missions.
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the story concept was good but the execution is terrible, the story starts quite well (I ignore chapter 1) mc was a criminal mastermind and is set by the shield as the greatest danger because a mobster has mentioned his name (it is already clear that he will go evil), mc continues his life until he tries to rob a particle accelerator (the thing to steal unknown and the author didn't bother to explain), gets hit by dark matter and connects to the force of speed, he also meets the speed force and talks to him and also explains the infinity gems, his power does not seem to be a secret because everyone knows what he uses and what powers he has (don't ask me how but everyone knows) mc is in the mcu and then after the battle of new york with the avengers for a mistake he goes to 616 and can easily defeat doctor strange and other bosses when he barely gets to mach 60, there is also the fact that with mach 3 he can't dodge a bazooka and for some reason loki kills a group of homeless, the shield becomes stupid for plot reasons, in short, various plots and theories that are one worse than the other, he also takes random costumes and power-ups (no one knows him but they already have suits and tachyons for him), mc expert in various fields of study does not use intelligence to use power but goes to sensations (yes, practically an idiot), the plot also talks about how op the force of speed is even if it only goes to mach 60 and various things, in short, if you can stand arrogant chinese mc and young master written in MTL you can stand the story otherwise get ready for a migraine
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I'm about to read it i can't take it anymore one time i had this idea to but not the speed force the MC has the power of death flash and i dropped it cause i don't have more information about death flash i am pretty exited reading this fan fic please author don't drop this
Nice! I like how you've made the speedforce and the Phoenix force part of a family. I think it makes sense, and serves justice to how nerfed the Flash was in DC. Good luck with the story, author-sama!
GS dude keep this story going the way u have it don't let anyone talk yo our of it this is the best Speedster book i've found! And i hope Nat is the love interest lol....
It started great ngl! One of the best starts to a fic i have ever seen HOWEVER! The author has proven that he is willing to comepletely screw over the MC for “plot” Instead of steadily getting stronger the MC’s powers go crazy and nearly kill him for absolutely no reason, KOing him and allowing the author to basically shove him into being Sheilds lapdog.
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English not my language - i read and write with autotransplantation. Writing Quality 4 - coz i cant say wrong or write. Updating Stability 3- this book only 3 day in my library and cant mark it better Story Development 1 - start and idea of ff - great. But so many holes on the plot... Sory i can't mark ZERO. Character Design - mc is bs. He chnge his mind from nothing. world background - too many holes. Bruce banner - knew about speedforce, but dont about stones. Stark and oscorp make particle accelerators ... Noone from them - can't do this coz' oscorp - biopharmaceutical, and stark not in this branch of science. If it make otto octavius would be better. Author give mc speedforce and give it nerf already after few chapter. (Yeah i can't say about rpg) When mc go for help - stark make costume with VIBRANIUM.... When they stop tesserakt - create blackhole.... After loki kill all family just take his hand.... Go to 616.... Just drop. Too many bs for me.
All STAR for the entertaining story. Hope that Bro. Author will keep doing the greatness as all his other stories. BANZAI to the interesting & OMOSHIROI stories!
I'll keep writing this because I like this but really you've got to either download Grammarly or just learn to put your paragraphs in half because smaller paragraphs are just better to read and look at.
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the starting was actually really good and captivating. However around the time where Duke couldnt stop that RPG is when i dropped it. You're telling me, Duke, running at Mach 3(at least 2.2kmph) like it's a walk on a sunday morning, isnt able to move fast enough to either save his family, or redirect the RPG(only 600mph)??? and in later chapters the author goes "its plot hole deal with it". There's another word for it, and that's lazy writing. you shpuld just pick a different character other than flash to write, the flash is just one of those superheroes that are just super OP that it makes being superhero look like child's play. So unless his antagonist is another speedster, hard for him to not overpower his enemies, unless it's "plot armour or plot hole"