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A Multiversal Group chat with A Self Insert into Jake Thane, Nefertati Vivi, Rias Gremory, Kazuma Sato, Shane Windym and Zorian Kazinski.
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Alright.. If you don't read RoyalRoad stories, and even if you do, chances are couple of the Mcs, and their worlds are gonna be foreign to you. Which is a bummer. The story is pretty chaotic and jumpy, it doesn't flow smoothly at all. Not surprising considering the author is trying to write from each MC's perspective and their progression in their respective worlds. Basically a fanfic AU x each Mc and the shifts each one of them have on the other being followed real time, in a single story. Yeah it's a bit much... The unfamiliarity with several of the worlds(Personally don't read many original stories on Royalroad), and choppy plot progression leads to a not very satisfying reading experience.
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I can't say it's the best but I still love it I'm not a fan of multiple poverty but I'm rooting for ya.........................................
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