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Mage King Retires
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A powerful wizard who was reincarnated on a foreign world decided to retire, and perhaps return to his original world.
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its a good read. smooth flow, yet to see obtacles, but faces life challenges. plays it cool,though i would be happy to see hm train his body oy enchance his body through magic. its tough plotline and if this continues it will be big . the mc is calm, mature and an old demon without any reverse scale currently.
I was expecting a powerful wizard living on the countryside or something similar due to the word “retires”. The MC doesn’t really retire and keeps fighting in the old world he’s originally from. The story is good other than that.
I really like it but the chapters are kinda short so I hope the updates are quick but other than that I’ll see what happens next.
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I like how the story takes place in modern earth and the story line and the background of the characters. Also I just like the setting it’s like those Korean novels with gates and stuff like solo leveling.
Writing quality is really good. And you cann see that the author thought a lot about the background of the world. Sadly my personal preference says no to the character designs and story developement :/ the start seemed promising but meh :/ Other people might enjoy it though
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World back ground and his past could be fleshed out more. And there are a few spelling mistakes here and there. But other then that I really like it and I hope you update more.