Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece

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ZoneTail

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》

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Your_host_HK

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LV 4

Spike009

A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.

LV 14

I_am_inevitable

It's just your average wishes/reincarnation novel nothing special.

LV 15

Mehmehmeh

This story bland and boring The MC is a arrogant young master beta male virgin character type, those should never be mixed together let alone be a MC. .........i could probably type a lot more but these are the major problems with this book and i don’t want to waste anymore time on this, it’s just not worth it.

LV 3

Retro_

I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.

LV 3

Shaska

I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................

LV 2

VEYN

Интересно, жду продолжение...................................................................................................................

LV 14

ReaderLove

Author that falsify their novel rating are a scum. Also the novel is probably dropped since there is no update for almost a month. I dont get how people write novel and then drop it without noticing their reader.

LV 13

Strawberrybonanza

Good story bro. Also thanks for frequent updates.... Sorry you got to deal with Haters that sucks mayne. Haters gun hate. Thanks for the story tho

LV 6

TrueImmortalDevil

only read if you are ok with following: inconsistancy, disrespecting cool characters, stupidity and calling a gun a sword and claim it to be swordsmanship ...

LV 5

Afonso_Aaron

I like the story ....................................................................................................................................

Like always I will give full ratings, it's free anyway. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

more chapter please. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************

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oraoraora

Meowmeoemeoemeoemeoemeoemoemeoemeiemeuehejejwjeheheheheh great shot dude anything with madara is 5 stars just hope you bring his sadistic side

LV 3

Sharata_draw

The title of this novel say “madara uchiha” not transmitted so yeah

LV 4

Ren_AshBell

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LV 13

AngelsCreed

I don’t know if anyone else noticed this but everytime a definition (ability/weapon) was given was straight copy paste from wiki. Just overall disrespect for original characters plus making them all girls threw me off. Zoro was completely ignored, God Usopp is dead, Sanji doesnt exist and thats all within 10 chapters. This story might have turned out better if the author put more effort into making his own OC and story line. Also single FL is preferred, max 2. This MC has 5 already within 10 chapters. Just doesn’t seem like there Will be any charactEr deVelopment ever