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Do you believe the place where lost souls in the human realm go?
I believed that kind of tale when I was young. The old used to call it Limbo, some called it Knowhere, and a peculiar name caught my attention, Lost.
It's a border between the human realm and the afterlife or who knows where.
It's a place where lingering spirits rest and impurities resides.
An old rumor once said, Lost is somewhat familiar with what is in the human realm is, It was a paradise, and every time we sleep, our souls go there and explore. Have fun.
But is it really?
Lies! Rumors are just rumors after all.
Lost is not a Paradise. It's a dimension of places, similar but different to what is the human world we live in.
Paradise? To the souls yes, but to a human flesh body and mind? Hell No.
...
A human was transported there with body and soul.
"What is going on?! Where am I? Someone--Help. I still want to live."
Getting to see what kind of place Lost is about... The poor souls decide...
(("I don't know where I am but... I hate to be in this pitiful situation. I must find a way!"))
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Ohooo. The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Keep up the good work I'll be waiting for your next update.
so as I was reading the first part of the story , literally I didn't knew what will happen next, though I may say that is a good sign that ur story is interesting and isn't boring like other stories . I like that the mc was related lol , the mc was so scared and it was really fun to see the mc 's reactions , I want to acknowledge that the details of the mc's reaction was on point. Overall the plot was really nice , as a reader I like to theorize what will happen next and again idk what to say , it really was unexpectable to the point that I get really nervous and worried about the mc ( which is good since readers should also feel like they are in that scene . Just keep the story flow going smoothly k. And I would like to recommend that u make a synopsis , I mean attest the background so readers would tackle ur story ( since slot of readers base on the synopsis) Heyy it's me mik², lol ur so professional and really brave to post works in English, lol hope ur brain cells still work after this. But to be frank I'm here to support all the way. Sorry for posting my review a bit late, honestly I was really having trouble with my time management and I just remembered my mission to give u a review HAHAHHAHAH GOODLUCKKK YUI [img=update][img=recommend]
The cover design is interesting. The synopsis could be a bit longer for readers who don't take time to invest in newbie authors. But woah, the chapters do make up for the synopsis with the MC getting kidnapped. My only suggestion is to add more details to the synopsis.
In the synopsis: What's going on? And the story presents a very descriptive sequence of incidents, echoing the question... Intrigue, suspense... To read, with great attention
Hi author-nim! What's this? What's this?! I felt like I was the MC! I feel like i was the one being kidnapped and dragged to a place where help is nowhere to be found! Made me feel like I have to learn the basic self-defense to survive if this happened to me. Writing can still be improved but it's very minor. The story is really catchy!
The world, the author has created- Creates a strange feeling of attachment, if seen from a reader's veiwpoint. But, it's clear that the writing style needs some trimmings which can be easily improved. But, it's fine as who doesn't has mistakes within Webnovel? Overall- Thats a good story to read. I Hope the work gets the attention it deserves!