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amaturewriter

fking retarded...dude, u think a slave auction would lie about a slaves FAKE identity to a CD of all people? CD, the people that kill commoners who touch em? and then the Auction house tells the fking slave to keep it a secret by giving him a DF? the fk? Do u know One piece? or even have common sense? and the MC accepts a random DF for this? jesus the stupidity take this as a warning to potential readers. MC is a supposed soldier but acts like some retarded child, throughout the 7 chps this idiot was cursing at his slaver, like a retard. if this dude was a soldier he would've shut up and planned and analysed the situations. And why would he insult his slaver? slaves have no rights...the stupid **** in this bk is annoying, and MC has a retarded personality. The MC screams in the auction at the people..u know, nobles and CD's. I mean forget commoners, these people who are scum that treat commoners like trash, And MC behaves like a retard in front of em. The English and grammar is decent, but this story is written by some who has zero idea of what a soldier is, and I am not sure if author has watched one piece

LV 5

ReyShii

why your novel same with Shaikh_Tohaa novel? are you Shaikh_Tohaa or you copy paste his story? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔