Legacy of the Dark Sage

LV 2

CriticalReader

Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for me The protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time) However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition) Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensate Plot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at times Worst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapter Overall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite

LV 4

Frostee_Flamey17

Hello Author! You did a good job on making a novel. I checked your profile and I was surprised to see that you are a girl. The way you wrote your story is better than most "boy authors" in this platform. I am going to give you my whole support (Power stones of my different accounts) since it was quite eccentric to know that a girl made this amazing novel (I am not discriminating women as a whole but I expected that women are quite proficient in making romantic novels ) Thank you

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LV 1

GrassHopperSensei

There is no depth and there are many cringe moments within the story. Does not grab my attention, very poor made

LV 5

Thee_AngryBird

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LV 4

Suprava_Bai

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LV 13

Youssef_Wael_7515

It ’s been 30 to 50 chapters that the Mc staying in the same tower waiting for the meeting to plan their next step it’s becoming boring

LV 14

Potatowned

By the standards of this site, it's good. Here's some more text to so I can hit the minimum character count to post this review. Blah blah blah.

LV 1

Khetan_Saini

So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter . It's definitely worth reading.

LV 1

khetan_saini

So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter . It's definitely worth reading.

LV 10

Nezyrin

I have not much to say about the story yet, except that I love the slow but detailed flow in every chapter. Looking forward to knowing more about the characters in the story, as well as their world! Keep it up!!! :D

LV 2

SAGE

I really love this novel but can you put a side chapter describing the characters after all we don't read the novel chapter after chapter we wait until we collect fifty or hundred chapters and after all that time it's hard to remember how the characters look like can you, please do that

LV 11

nanaminalluri

I liked it a lot and was following the work for more than 3 years I hope it will be out of haitus

LV 12

Angel_Sigiloso

for now i'll watch it cause don't has harem or at least i guess so, and looks interesting, if i like it i'll back to edit this coment

LV 15

Sandra_9925

Kyran Regis a gem in the making sometimes stubborn sometimes emotional but allways loyal to his ethics and standart

LV 14

KaitlynLenke

Probably the BEST novel I’ve ever read in my entire life! Absolutely INCREDIBLE, as someone who doesn’t like weak to strong and just likes powerful from the start this was the first time I actually enjoyed a weak to strong…. The story line is INCREDIBLE, there’s so many mysteries that we figure out and I binged all of it within maybe a week, I LOVE THIS NOVEL 😱🔥🩷🩷

LV 4

Samurai_m0

By far my favorite novel on this app I’m excited for new chapters everyday I just read todays chapter 319 every chapter is exciting and makes me look forward to the next chapter if anyones considering reading this novel I 100% recommend you do

LV 14

BlazZzer

The weighting quality of this novel on one of the best in f not the best on this site. It had an ingaging story and has an op main character. What else could u want? Stop reading thoes trash system harem cultivation novels this is waaaaaaaaayyyyy better in every way. Keep it on p author I look forward to reading these chapters every day👍👍👍

LV 14

Chahed_Madridistas

So far (40 chaps) its amazing..5 stars deserved..🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

LV 11

shouldra

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